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 Reviewed By: Rowina  On: September 22, 2005 19:21 CDT
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Ooo, I like it! Reminds me of the scene on the Lookout after Cell got whooped, and they're talking about Krillin and 18, and Yamcha's bragging, and Piccolo's fuming because he just doesn't get it. Get these two together--go forth and write yaoi, NOW.
 Reviewed By: Pixelgoddess not signed in  On: September 19, 2005 22:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
But it is cute and awkward and damned uncomfortable. Made me grin. Poor Piccolo - the object of attention. *laughs* What if all of the Z warriors start 'noticing' Piccolo. Wonder if he would think he'd missed some strange human custom - or if he smelled or something. *shoves bunnies at her*

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