| "Desperate Indulgence" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: genial!
Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2011 11:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh!! so hot :D thank you very much!! a great, great lemon it has been intense and it´s the best vegeta´s point view i have read great job! PD: Enhoyment factor: 100 |
Reviewed By: Apolonia86 On: January 07, 2008 00:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well darling, this is the best lemon from Bulma and Vegeta I haver EVER read... this is fantastic, it's a real pity you have not uploaded another chapter... but this one is FANTASTIC... oh my! thx SOOOOOOOOOO much for this chapter, it was AWESOME!! I will keep reading the other stories now.... thnx agaaaaaaaaain!! ^^
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Reviewed By: theresa On: October 01, 2005 02:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I loved this fanfic soo much! It was so amazing... and erotic *grins* very good! *gives thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate(not logged in) On: September 30, 2005 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You were right....very drool-worthy! YUMMY!!!! Love it! V.M.
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Title: NICE
Reviewed By: Whoa On: September 30, 2005 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was freaking incredible. I think I need to go find my husband right now and do exactly what just happened in your story!
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy not logged On: September 29, 2005 01:20 EDT
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Wow, ouch this story is just....damn... it is absolutely tantalising and orgasmic, fueled with soo much hightened sensual energy that the well placed climatic explosion at the end wreaks delightful havoc on the senses. A brilliant story and yes you MUST do more lol
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Reviewed By: geminisoul (girlinthecurl03 from the Salon) On: September 28, 2005 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has anyone ever told you that you are one of the BEST lemon writers out there?In every single one of your stories you have the most explosive lemons, and they are all different and unique in their own ways! None of your lemons are the same, and I love that. This has put me in the mood to write some more of my Goku/ChiChi story! I was getting discouraged cus nobody and given me feedback in the Writer's Workshop forum at the Salon, but what the hell! I'm gonna write it anyway! :D AWESOME JOB, this is gong on my favorites!!! P.S. When are you going to update your Goku/ChiChi story? I haven't seen it in FOREVER!
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Reviewed By: Just a fan On: September 25, 2005 06:34 EDT
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That was..... so sweet. And hot. And romantic. Please, make a sequal!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: September 23, 2005 10:52 EDT
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that was hot... I loved it... it was a great lemon... Great job on that one... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Heiress2thethrone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 02:14 EDT
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OH WOW. im at alost for words..... wow....deep breaths. shiz that was crazy. wow....wow
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Title: Desperate Indulgence
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 23:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gohan's Onna you have surpassed yourself again with such storytelling magic! That was a great, erotic one shot--very nerve racking. The sexual tension was breathtaking er......breathgiving hehe. Great Job! ^_~ Bura-chan
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Reviewed By: Sky Marshal Oz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 20:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was definately one of the best lemons I have read in a long time. You should write more.
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Reviewed By: Philips On: September 21, 2005 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hot damn! that was juicy! MORE MORE MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: free-sprit not logged in I'm to lazy! On: September 21, 2005 11:40 EDT
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oh pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease! You just have to make a sequal! You aware of how well you write these things? I would LOVE a sequal, and yes, I agree with you, it was very very romantic, and very cute, makes everyone who like V/B smile and cry. :) keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Rowina On: September 20, 2005 19:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes, definitely high up there on the drool scale--way to go! I say go forth and write MORE lemons, especially if you're gonna give us the lovely couple doing some of wild, hentai stuff that you hinted at a couple of times in the buildup. *stopping to drool again* Ahem. Just one teensy thing that jarred me (and I'm probably, not make that definitely, nitpicking) was the phrase "untrained boy." Maybe "untried", though maybe not. The idea of the Prince being trained to do *that*--well, not a bad idea actually. Alright, if you use "untrained", then ya gotta write about his training. *third drool pause* Excuse me, I think I'll bow out before I electrocute myself with hentai Vegeta thoughts. Did I say, MORE! Please.
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