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| "Family Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: anaki (nli) On: March 04, 2006 15:04 CST
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this is soo awesome, why haven't you updated? if you aren't going to update then i'd love to take it on if you don't mind, but if you are going to update then pleaseeeeee update!
| Reviewed By: yoyo's rule! On: November 19, 2005 11:32 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE THIS FIC! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!
| Reviewed By: kiki14 (not logged in) On: November 16, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. I love this story and I've only read one chapter. You have such a unique character. She seems entirely original and other than Luna Lovegood from Harry Potter one of the most... laid back and... comfortably insane people I have ever read about. I wonder if she's going to be taller than Ed, I hope so, people always have this idea that the female has to be smaller than the male for anything to work. Anyway. Your style of writing has something about it that I find addicting, I don't even know what it is, but it works! I hope I'm not your first reviewer, (though I love being the first reviewer) because you have such a grand storie it would be a shame if I was the first to leave a review. I think I am so I will leave a nice long one. Oh, yeah I forgot, I really love Talon's fashion sense, the mismatched socks were my favorite... at first I thought she might be bipolar the way she suddenly was like: "What a stupid conductor." You know? The Chaos Alchemist, that sounds like a name I can see someone being called, I hear a lot of stupid ones that don't make sense but I think this one will in time, if the cards are played right anyhow. Yeah, so I really have fallen in love with your character and I really hope you update soon. I'll be really happy when you do! Keep up the good work, don't get discouraged due to lack of reviews, (that gets a lot of authors...) and if you get any flames than ignore them. (I doubt you will though.) Toodles!
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