| "Rin's Message and Sesshomaru's Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Kourinthehunter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. One of the few fan-fics that has actually made me want to cry; you captured both Sesshoumaru and Rin and their relationship like an artist captures the flower on canvas. Flawless. (I read the two in quick sucession as well; both were well written in my opinion.)
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 19:45 CDT
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This wouldn't fit into the last review ... another congratulations on being the first author to receive a full ten out of ten from me; I never give perfect scores out!!!! Very, very well done!!!! And, I can't wait to read more of your future works; I hope there are some really soon!!!! Yours truly, Claire (^.~)
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! An amazing end to a very, very brilliantly written fic. To answer your two questions, actually, yes, your writing [style] has improved since "Rin's Smile and Sesshomaru's Decision". This sequel had more of an angst base to it, and a much stronger message than the first installment of your "Rin's - and Sesshomaru's -" As for my favorite of the two, I do believe this one "Rin's Message and Sesshomaru's Promise" is; it just had a huge message about being separated by death from the ones you love. Short, concise, yet so powerful. Ultimately this last chapter was what pulled on my heartstrings the most out of all. You have successfully become the second author to make me want to cry, ^_^ Anyway, again, I really must praise you for your extremely accomplished work and writing; I'm honestly not one for reading fics with such short chapters, but this one had that certain allure to it, and I just had to read, and keep reading. You've undoubtedly exceeded all the author's who've been placed on my favorites, and among them are author's who've been writing for years on end! Amazing job! I'm absolutely astonished at the level of your creativity and uniqueness; this fic is one of a kind, definitely. Once again, I have to thank you for writing such an awesome fic; and for proving to me that reading fan fiction is still worthwhile; your writing has unquestionably gone above and beyond the newest standard of fan fiction writing. Well done! ~Clarissa Ann Mirko
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu (not logged in) On: September 25, 2005 17:35 CDT
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Sesshomaru entered. ...and what did he see? I'm so glad you're an efficient updater. Another very well done chapter. I loved seeing Sesshomaru being so compassionate and caring yet keeping his usual stoic demeanor. Well done! I hope the next chapter comes as soon as this one did! Until then, ~Claire
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Reviewed By: curly 211 On: September 25, 2005 13:45 CDT
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Having that cliff hanger is so mean! Grr...now I want to now want happens and I'm going to obsess about it until I now! >< Very nice and I can't wait to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: sadsoul On: September 25, 2005 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is really good. I think Sess doesn't realize the concept of time when it comes to rin. He is about to get hit hard. At first I thought he was going to find an elixer for her and that why he sent the bird ahead of him. Sess is going to be so heart broken. This is not going to be a hapyy ending...whimpers
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 20:56 CDT
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What a way to leave someone hanging! "Rin breathed." Rin breathed ... what kind of breath?^_^ Another very well done chapter by the way. hmm ... I have on concern, and it doesn't have to do with your writing; I'm absolutely floored at the fact that you haven't received more reviews! I would've thought there'd be at least twenty plus by now! Ah well ... some reviewers are just really apathetic I suppose. Anyway, I hope the next chapter comes soon; I'm really anxious to read it. Keep up the amazing work! ~Claire
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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This is definitely starting out to be an awesome sequel to Rin's Smile and Sesshomaru's Decision; I'm sure this'll be just as good, maybe even better. I am so amazed at how well these fics have come together. Well done! I'm always looking for a good non-AU fic with Sesshomaru and Rin; but this isn't just good, it's absolutely amazing! I can't wait until the next chapter is posted! Keep up the brilliant work!!!! ~Claire
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