Reviewed By: Hiroto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I love fanfics that are diffrent from all the other fanfics out there and yours is maybe one of the best in my opinion. It seemed a little rushed at the end but I liked the whole outcome anyway. And I'm kinda sorry if I seem a bit heartless but the killing off of younger Itachi and leaving ITACHI standing by his son's grave really really got to me. I like the fact that you didn't make ITACHI change all that much and if the son had survived, I think maybe ITACHI would have become even more soft. (Ne, that's an interesting take...) Okay, enough long reviews. If you wanna know more on my opinion of the story, you'll have to ask me. >_>... UPDATE! >_
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