Reviewed By: Comtess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 20:11 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story not only because it's well written. Zack does not have regrets about the way he treats women or what he sees in them. He cherishes what they give him without feeling responsible for them. His love for women is never unconditional, not even the love for Aeris. It seems that, realizing that he can't find anything genuinely new in any woman, he tries to change his perception and his attitude towards his relationships in order to find satisfaction. Aeris seems like the perfect girl to achieve ths goal - sweet, innocent, unblemished. Zack opens himself up to the possibility to commit himself to a single woman but he still watches her closely. What she does and how she behaves; he muses about what he expects from her: not to change. As soon as she does not match up to his dreams of her anymore he might realize that nothing has really changed and move on to the next hunt. That's what Zack is - a hunter, and you've portrayed him very well! P.S. Makes one feel sorry for Zack... Keep up the good work! Comtess
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