| "A Dark Past" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: caretl lover On: October 03, 2006 20:10 CDT
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a dark past = love
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: October 03, 2006 20:09 CDT
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a dark past =
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 22:22 CDT
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Okay, not only are the doctors here not doctors, but the staff is crazier than the inmates. I'm of course talking about Kagome enjoying Sudoku. Anyone who can understand the rules to that exist mentally on a plane experienced only by possessed people on PCP. I like how Inuyasha bit the bullet and put up with that evil thing just to stop the girl from crying. Seems visiting him is more helpful than visiting Sango. I would be surprised by an inmate being a better therapist than the therapist, but I'm not. And what's Kagome so mad about? It's her fault that any Sudoku was played... attempted... whatever. But seriously, Kagome pissed me off in this chapter. It's one thing for her to stand idly by while she thinks Inuyasha's misdiagnosed. He's not her charge, so it really isn't her place, and besides Sango screwing up could be an anomaly anyway. But she's responsible for that little girl who's getting the wrong treatment from someone who has no business doing what she's doing. She may not be suicidal now, but after a little while of Sango's "treatment" she may well be. Kagome's known for days of at least two people that are getting the wrong, and potentially harmful treatment, and she hasn't attempted to do anything about it save for offering encouragement to the girl who doesn't know what she's doing. Kagome really needs to grow a set and risk hurting some feelings before Sango does some real damage. And Kaede needs to stop letting fake interns (because real interns get some training before they start interning) look after her suicidal patients.
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Title: woo
Reviewed By: anubishimura nli On: September 24, 2006 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WO0oo I haven't read in like 6 chapters! =-o I finally got a chance to read! I'm so excited for all the lovely chapters!! *yay for this story!!* So Keep up the great work and I hope all is well in life! :) And I adore this story!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell is going on with sango?! Please get her some help and soon! Tell me somebody that really knows their job is coming!! Aw Inu does care about the little one he just won't say it. I hope someone comes to care for her...like maybe Kagome could take her home. I hope ya update when ya can!^_^
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 08:00 CDT
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...That has almost nothing to do with the rest of the story..
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Title: sweet!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ominousfog [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude awsome koga and naraku are semi-perverts and kagomes fucking sneaky.but i gotta know did menomaru get inuyasha in the funny farm?what did kikyo do?and whats this plan to have inuyasha out by his nirthday?will him and kagome get together when e does get out?where will he go?did kikyo adopt or something maybe arrange a false marriage kill someone she thought he care about or get a hooker to have a threesome?haha please update!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Chapters 1-23
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo, Inu still has more story to tell!! It just gets better and better and I'm a new reader to this story. I have to say, you are quite talented. I love the plot so far, it's interesting and full of character. Your characterization is beautiful and everything seems to flow properly. I am also quite happy with your chapter length and that your chapters always have progress with them! Finally Inu and Kag realize they have feelings for one another, it took long enough! lol I can't wait to hear more about what Inu's youkai voice says! I have questions too! Is it Inu's youkai voice that told him that Kikyou was unsuitable for a mate? I assume that his youkai has to approve of his mate too? I'm sure you'll explore his feelings more in future chapters as well. Another question, Kagome does have miko powers, right? Why don't any of the demons comment on it, even Inuyasha, when they first meet her? Why doesn't anyone say anything about it at all? Come to think of it, Inuyasha is right in that we don't really know too much about Kagome. She's going to have to do some sharing in the future! lol Actually, I'm quite interested in what Kaede has in store for Inuyasha and Kagome cause it's obvious those women in the office were plotting something for the two of them! He won't talk to Sango anymore after all. I look forward to reading more soon!! As for your spelling and grammar, I'm sure we're all thankful you editted! I know am I because it was rare to find spelling and grammar errors so far. You're doing a great job! All I can ask for to improve your story is more of it. ^^ Perhaps more description could enhance your story as well, especially of the places and things the characters interact with. I hope to read more soon and I encourage you to continue.
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Title: omigod
Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 21:34 CDT
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this story is sooooooo awsome!! Omigod! What are they gonna do to Inuyasha???! Send him to Shwinsen? Go and make him meet Menomaru and Kikyou and his family again??! And that thing with kagome was awsome!!!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 21:10 CDT
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Hmmm... So there's another player pulling strings at the hospital... And this person has an interest in Inuyasha's treatment... You're going through a lot of trouble to not mention who it is too. I'd guess this mystery woman is Inuyasha's mother (or maybe Rin), but that's too obvious. Maybe I've been listening to too many of Alice Cooper's songs about being crazy (which if you listen too while reading this story makes you a little paranoid), but to me there seems to be a slight menace to this person. There was certainly less awkwardness between Inuyasha and Kagome than I thought there would be. Assuming that he just wasn't avoiding answering the question, it's a little sad that Inuyasha doesn't know who he's closest to. Considering nobody's even visited him, he probably feels that nobody is close to him anymore. And he's probably at fault for a big chunk of that.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 01:08 CDT
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ooooohhh tricky ladies! lol I liked that chapter! He didn't realize he kissed her?? odd...O.o...
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Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You're really starting to throw in the information now. This is great. I really loved the shell convo. Did you come up with that yourself or did you have inspiration? I would like to ask that you re-read your chapters to find/fix spelling errors, that seems to be the only proble you have. Did InuYasha really mean to say "I'll tell him to go gay..." or "I'll tell him to go away.." because that was the strangest suggestion I've ever heard "go gay" and then maybe he'll leave me alone. Anyways, you're doing great so far. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: me On: September 04, 2006 18:09 CDT
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*gasp* no fair! you can't end it right there! i want to know what happens! update soon please!
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Title: That was nice
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy he told her now. This chapter was cute and funny and the kiss oooh what will happen now? UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 16:07 CDT
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~laughs histericly~ omg that was funny!!! i love it how Kagome has a speech about almost everything. lol they finally kissed!!! its about time. twenty question time again lol poor sango she really needs a new job.oh thanks for complimenting my story. :) yep yep im hyper again i had a muffin. well here is a present for ur awesome story. ~pulls out a muffin & puts it next to your computer~ well byez update soon pretty please!!! i gave u a muffin so u dont get a cherry on top.
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