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| "A Dark Past" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 12:33 CDT
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yay I love updates! yay!
| Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: April 26, 2006 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so i finally caught up!! oh my gosh! i love this story soo much!! ^.^ I'm in school, majoring in psychology so this is all really interesting to me - i really enjoy reading about twisted pasts and different techinques of healing and internal monologues and defense mechanisms! it's all so awesome! and this story is so fun to read! so yay! i look forward to more but take your time - i can't complain since i haven't updated in like months haha ^.^ Great job though! - always anubis!
| Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Inu really still saying kikyo's his friend? By the way what did she do? I really do enjoy your storie. Keep it up.*_~
| Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 22:40 CDT
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Oh. My. God. Sango almost seemed like she knew what she was doing. (It's just too bad she didn't think about taping her sessions so she wouldn't have to worry so much about note taking.) Did Naraku do some shape-shifting? Is the real Sango tied up in a closet somewhere? I don't buy that she would improve so much after one talk with her boss, and isn't that the sort of thing Kaede should have been doing with her anyway? If she has time to intrude on her patients' personal lives surely she can give her interns helpful advice. I mean, she could if she wasn't obviously a quack that is. And wow, does Kagome ever suck at 20 questions. She didn't really find anything out and wasted like a quarter of her questions accidentally. Inuyasha also makes it sound like he single-handedly made being a Hanyou acceptable, or at least helped in a big way. Is he exaggerating, cause if he's not... Damn, no wonder he's there. That's a lot to live up to. I mean, what can you possibly do in your life that would measure up to that? His life peaked before he hit puberty. And what he did to Menomaru... Not nearly as bad as I had imagined. (I thought he seduced the girl or something.) Not that talking shit about your friend to their girlfriend is a great thing to do, and he obviously needs to learn to take responsibility for his actions, but if THAT was enough to end the relationship, it wouldn't have lasted anyway. They would never have gotten passed living together, when they'd discover that the little flaws would become huge deals worthy of screaming matches late into the night.
| Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 15:38 CDT
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Love it I can't wait till you update again
| Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 15:13 CDT
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Great, now I just know I'm going to be kicking myself when all the revelations are, uh, revealed... I have to say though, I'm not a big fan of Inuyasha arguing with himself in his head, just because everyone does it. There has to be a more interesting way to go about the same thing.(I dunno, maybe have him dream the arguments or something, it's not like he's been an insomniac in this story) And yay, more Sango! I think those sessions are my second favourite thing in the story. Maybe because she reminds me of my high school guidance counsellor, which makes it easier to feel Inuyasha's annoyance and write chapter reviews. And I was finally right with a prediction, (I was due!) which is nice. About his mother though... still, you'd think if she was doting she would have visited at least a couple of times (I believe it's mentioned that Inuyasha's had no vistors since being commited) or written to him. Or that she would've stopped the calender that she probably knew Inuyasha wouldn't have been thrilled about, since it was done without him knowing about it (unless she's just spineless or something). Doting parents don't allow things to happen that will make their committed child even more angry/depressed than he already is. That's why I thought she was out of the picture somehow (in a coma, unable to travel, divorced and living on the other side of the world, something like that) not necessarily dead, but just not able to do anything. And it's looking like Inuyasha screwed one of his friends over. I'll be very disappointed if guilt is what's put him there, mainly because it's one of the few things I don't think I guessed. I liked the stuff with the kid though. Usually I don't like the sappy stuf, but here it worked because it shows that Inuyasha can be nice to other people than Kagome. He's only a bastard to people who deserve it (Sango, Miroku, and Kaede), which makes it okay. Frankly I had my doubts. And when will Kaede make a reappearance? I want to see her get knocked down a peg. Or nine.
| Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!! The little girl is soooo cute! I love this fic.^_^
| Title: I like.
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chap. I don't know how many people will get it, but for me I can see that a few things in here will be 'need to knows' in the next chapters to come.^_^ Hey I'm sooooo sorry I haven't emailed u in like 4ever. My weeks have been HELL! But I'll be talkin' to ya real soon... LadyWolf
| Title: Return of the Long Winded Reviewer
Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 15:08 CDT
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Uhh... cute was the word I never use. I use crush all the time, just in a different context. (As in "bwhahaha, stupid Goomba, taste Mario's wrath as he crushes your head!") So not only does Inuyasha's family not want to see him, but his DOCTOR doesn't want to either. That's cold... Maybe it's his breath... So, the girl Kagome's looking after, will she be the same one Inuyasha was nice to way back in the story that we haven't heard from again? And that session with Sango was a good read. But she seems to have a problem with crazy people: she is really bad at dealing with them. The problem's not that Inuyasha won't help himself or help Sango help him, the problem is that Sango doesn't know how to ask questions or listen to her patients. If she did she wouldn't be concentrating solely on depression and using circular logic for her advice. It's obvious that Inuyasha wants to talk, because he'll talk to Kagome. Really Sango needs to peel away the bandage instead of ripping it off all at once like she's been doing. I'm just waiting for someone to give Sango the verbal smackdown that she needs. And is Inuyasha's mother out of the picture somehow? I don't see a doting mother not visiting her son in the hospital or allowing the calendar to be put out. It seems like his family wants nothing to do with him unless it makes them money, which isn't doting in the least. So, the deadly mistake... Did Kikyou accidently curse him to make him human or something but instead of him being human, she gave him a death sentence that has to do with the new moon? (Hey I had to get another crackpot theory eventually. Not that you'll give an answer even if it is right.) I can see how that could send someone to the loony-bin.
| Reviewed By: Avarwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 13:31 CDT
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Hey! Sorry, just wanted to point out that the title of my last review isn't supposed to be there... I'm not sure where it came from, but it's not supposed to be there...
| Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 21:36 CDT
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I love this story I hope you update soon I can't wait to find out what happens
| Reviewed By: star555555528(not signed in) On: April 12, 2006 18:30 CDT
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Ok i really really like this chapter please update asap and keep up the great work.
| Title: Go Elsewhere
Reviewed By: Avarwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... this is really amazingly well written and incredibly interesting. You've gotten us deep inside Inuyasha's mind, kept us interested, and even inserted a little humour-- all without telling us even really the slightest thing about what happened to Inuyasha. All we know is that Kikyo was somehow involved... This is just really great...
| Reviewed By: Dragonman On: April 04, 2006 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm.. very interesting. so Kikyo slept with someone (assuming Naraku.. though maybe not, since you've already got him in the fic..) to get some business deal of Inuyasha's to work, then. hmm.. is this who kagome wants to bring to see Inuyasha? ^_^ I guess i'll just have to wait 'n see. .. but don't stop writing!! I liked the quick updates, but please continue! Great story! :D
| Reviewed By: ME!!!!!!! eheh On: April 03, 2006 17:09 CDT
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Ba da ba ba baaaaaaaa I'm luvin it! GIGGLE Great story so far. But please give me some I-K romance. I LOVE that stuff. Ja!
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