Reviewed By: Max_yo_mama On: September 27, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah. AH. Reminds me of my first fanfic- rushed, stupid, and OOC. You need to work on it, but you have potential.
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