| "Two Cans of Soda" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Color me surprised
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was actually expecting a pretty bad ending and a badly written fic, but well I'll be damned. This little ficlet was pretty good. Hooray for you, making it actually believable in one's minds eye that Bikky and Lai would actually get it on. Bravo.
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Reviewed By: Anony-mouse On: November 19, 2006 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For what it's worth, I usually never read anything other than the traditional couples, but this was good. My only gripe is that you used massage oil, an oil-based lubricant. Oil weakens latex, causing condoms to break more often than not. Unless it wasn't a latex condom, which should have been specified in the passage. Just nit-picking. Otherwise, it was wonderful, and completely different.
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty damn awesome. It was completely believable to me.lol And that was the main thing about reading this pairing. I give you kudos for writing this and just want you to know I enjoyed it very much. My only complaint would be that the actualy screwing was only two or three sentences before it was over, but ah well. I loved it. ^^
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Title: *grin*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so funny how they do it and then go back to acting normal. Well, normal and naked. ^_^
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Title: More
Reviewed By: Demonskid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 15:25 CST
Comment/Review:
OMIG ya hafta continue this in like a sequal like a mpreg saying the condom ripped and Bikki is a hurmaphrodite carriying Lai's child please
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Reviewed By: Astrael On: September 28, 2005 12:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
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Title: Beta-reader and friend
Reviewed By: chibi-onna-chan On: September 27, 2005 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuki-chan, you have done SO well with this! I enjoyed every second of it. *grins and applauds* Hehe, hope you'll beta for my Bikky/Lai fic. Much love, and as always, good work!
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