| "Back to Where I belong" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Yokoshima-chan (not signed in. big shock) On: October 29, 2005 00:38 CDT
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Yay! Another prettyful chapter ^_^ Much squeeage to be had. And AWW!! HE KISSED HER HEAD!! Sorry, too much sugar. In response to the last review, yeah, a beta reader might not be a bad idea... =o
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 00:01 CDT
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Your story is very good, but you really need to get a beta reader. There are missing words in some sentences and many, many typos. I think you'd get a whole lot more reviews if you cleaned up the typos and mistakes, because it is a very good story. I hope you update soon, but please write the next chapter when you are not so sleepy so that there are fewer mistakes. Thanks.
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 04:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is on my faves list! I want to know how Inuyasha will react to seeing Kagome again! This is very captivating. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Yokoshima-chan (being lazy) On: October 20, 2005 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squees*!! *cough* I mean, poor Kagome! *gives her some gatorade* Update soon! ^_^ Oh, and *gives you a prodding stick* For those people who don't review. =D Now if you'll excuse me I need to collapse into a little exhausted ball right over there. *points to the closet* G'night! ^^
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: October 20, 2005 23:08 CDT
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great job so far! looking forward to another update!
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Reviewed By: Yokoshima-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 01:16 CDT
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*squees*!! Please write more soon! I'm rapidly falling in love with this story.
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Reviewed By: Mikoprincess231 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 21:37 CDT
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Very Good story. I am in love with it. Please write more soon.
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