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| "Therapy: Tenchi Style" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 15:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I say that you should do Tenchi next. It should be good.
| Title: this is good
Reviewed By: psychic guardian angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great i can't wait for Ryoko's session. in my opinion shes like a female inuyasha but nicer. keep writing m'kay
| Reviewed By: GrumblyStuff [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since you keep mentioning what "big" "hit" your other "story" was, I thought I'd read this. Now, tell me truthfully, what's your definition of a "big hit"? Did you get lots of "lolz" and "rite moar" or maybe "wow, this is ery gud ps read my story an giv it a gud revew!" I ask because this "story" seems more like author notes since it's devoid of any sort of plot or introspection or, well, anything to make it a real story and not some SI wankfest so you can talk to these imagined characters. You could do so much better by avoiding the self-insert. Maybe Miho-Kiyo got a very nice job at an office and they do well but in order to keep it, they are required to have a psyche-evaluation. You know, ANYTHING other than "HAY, I'm RANDOM ANIME CHARACTER calling YOU for help! Gimme call back ASAP!"
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