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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
my gosh! i am so extatic! i wish you guys would have found my story erlyer! i quit writeing this because of lack of encouragement. But thank you all! i love u!
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Title: Good one!!!
Reviewed By: dragon_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is an outstandin fic.It has creativity, and the air of a professional author.I registered just to review this fic.
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Reviewed By: GoThLaTiNa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! IT'S MARCH!!!! CAN'T U MAKE THE TIME BETWEEN UR STORIES SHORTER!!!! I NEED 2 KNO WUT SANGO'S REACTION IS!!! AND IF THINGS START 2 GET WIERD OR HOTTER BETWEEN KAGOME AND INUYASHA!!! DONT LEAVE ME HANGING 4 2 LONG!!! AND THIS BETTER NOT B A CLIFF HANGER....I HATE THOSE.....CYA!!! and ur pretty good with details....lol
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Title: why is it so short taffy?
Reviewed By: demonicpride32 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 09:54 CST
Comment/Review:
hey, its me. why is the story so short? i was into the chap until you kind of...i don't know...stopped it. come on Sam...finish it, I really enjoy it.
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Title: hey thank you all who read!
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thank you guys for all the vizits! i hope you all send me a comment. or review
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Title: when is your next chapter?
Reviewed By: demonicpride32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you making the next chapter? i'm literally dying to read more...talk to me in ther reviews for red fusion
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you! i tend to do that often. i relise now. that microsoft word doesent ceatch some things! ^>^
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Title: very good to be your first fanfic...
Reviewed By: demonicpride32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I enjoyed the inuyasha story. Even though your grammar was pretty off, I liked it. A little advise though, when writing, make sure that you look over it and proof-read your fic okay. Believe me I use to be the same...until I had help now I'm a pretty prominent writer. If you want to and I would love for you to do this...you could read my fics just to get some ideas about styles of writing. Because you got inuyasha and kagome solid, I can actually picture them its so vivid. But there could always have room for improvements. If you feel like it, go to feature fanfics and type in red fusion for sci-fi, Sakara Chapters for alternate realities, or Metal Tears for action and supernatural. And if you want to you could review as well, I would love for you to do so. Well that's it I guess. You can think of me as your virtual mentor okay. If you need any help or have any questions...look me up. I'm demonicpride32 on mediaminer. or email me at demonicpride32@yahoo.com I look forward in reading your stories.
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