| "Henzuru" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: neosildrake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great story so far! a few nice twists, like the one with Itachi. also good that you didn't wrote in a bunch of female OCs to accompany Kit/Naruto. I really don't like those kind of Mary Sues. So, next come Orochimaru and Sasuke? What will Sasuke think, when he learns that his bro did not kill his family? revenge on Konoha? I dunno. Not only the ordinary villagers live there, but also many of Narutos/Kits friends (yes, I think they can be considered his friends) like the other genins and ex-genins, Tsunade, Kakashi and Iruka. anyway, update please.
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Reviewed By: kaiduan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story i hope you finish it. Oh, and if you posted it on fanfiction.net you would get alot more reviews since this is such a goood story.
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Title: WOW OMG
Reviewed By: Tsunadi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 15:19 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW THIS IS GOOD!!! UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF KAMI!!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: naota_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good deal better than the last one, I hope you update soon
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Title: dd
Reviewed By: kpkchq [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 06:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ywepp! this is much better than your old one! (not sayign your old one was bad just this is way more descriptive n stuff( Update soon!!
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