| "Adjustments" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: LM On: October 04, 2005 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this story! I also read it on fanfiction.net and its so good!
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Title: Adjustments
Reviewed By: (MACCAM) On: October 02, 2005 15:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice start to this story. i like how you go into detail with them both. please update soon ..
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