| "And Now I've Lied To You" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was really good :) it was super sad that kagome and inuyasha died cause I lovve them so much! but I thought it was a great poem. I think you should do more :D
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Reviewed By: yumi43093 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good. You should write more. And I disagree with emike89. There are a lot of poems that are writen in that style. I loved it!
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
not bad at all.
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Reviewed By: emike89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 18:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a very nice poem even though I don't normally read them. I would like to make one comment though...I think it would be a better poem if you refrained from using the same line over and over again. You should either change the line periodically or perhaps combine a few lines and use that line to end a bigger section instead of using it over and over again to end a really small section. It becomes a little redundant after a while if you know what I mean. I thank you for taking your time to read my comment and it is a very nice poem =). ~emike~
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