| "The Reaper" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Child of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't like reviewing unless a story shows a lot of promise, and you of all people should know that. You really seem to be in trouble, which kinda surprises me, because you're doing a good job with the story...
But here's my idea anyway. You said that Nate will lose control whenever he hears that strange sentence, right? Well, what about his kids? Will they have the same problem? Maybe they should, especially during a battle with the enemy. I dunno...this idea isn't one of my best, so do whatever you want, Nate. -_-... |
Reviewed By: zoid-dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
better than ever. more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Child of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? You'd done a good job, as usual. I can't really help you out idea-wise (sorry) But I can give you a name for a team. How about the Marauders? (It's the name I was going to use for my own story, but I can make up another name.)If you don't like the name, I understand. |
Reviewed By: Xeno On: June 29, 2002 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just going to point something out. In the show Zoids, the Berserk Fuhrer was called the Berserk Fury because in WWII, Hitler was called Fuhrer by the Germans, and CN thought that that would offend viewers. So, just letting you know, the Berserk Fury's actual name is the Berserk Fuhrer.
On another note, this has been a very good fan fic, I'm at chapter 7 now and it's very interesting. I though it would be crap when the romance stuff started in, but now I'm suprised to brought it back to an action story (not many people can successfully do this). So keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: zoid-dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 15:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
another review from me. cool cool cool!
good job. the chapters are getting better and better. try to write more often though |
Reviewed By: jager-man-123 On: June 20, 2002 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you included the outlaw star cast into this whole story. Lots of suspense, romance, and humor. After reading this fan fiction I hope to write better stories. Keep on writing!!! |
Reviewed By: Lee Kimiya On: June 19, 2002 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT'S A GREAT STORY AND I HOPE YOU GET MORE IN SOON!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! Love, Lee |
Reviewed By: zoid-dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when i started to read this fanfic, i couldn't stop. the author is exceptionally good. better than a few professionals. |
Reviewed By: Child of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2002 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, this just keeps getting better and better... I love it! Oh, thanks for all of your reviews on my story. It has been a big help. |
Reviewed By: Mr Sarde On: April 13, 2002 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two words. Kick Ass. Oncore (I suck at spelling, i think) |
Reviewed By: Cody/Hyper Saiyen Epyon On: April 03, 2002 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great idea for this fic. Keep the susspence and anticipatioon in the cliff hangers. How about finding a way for Isalina and Eric to get there own Zoids (Ultamit X's of course). Also, how about having the flashback to the time that Nate, Mayuka, and Julia go to the hot springs. |
Reviewed By: browneyes8133 On: February 24, 2002 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well think that It was a great fanfic but u didn't have to end it like that I hate that type of endings it always gets me thinking.... anyway It was really good I mean it u have talent in the writing department, keep writing okay :^p |
Reviewed By: Child of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2002 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I don't usually read crossover fanfics, but I really like this one. (I don't usually write reviews either.) I loved your style, and I like the cliffhanger ending. I hope that you get the soon-to-come daughter involved in your next story. You know, maybe get her kidnapped by an enemy or something? |
Reviewed By: laserliger On: February 19, 2002 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome fanfic. the deathraptor is awesome, and i love the idea of a QPC. i think nate was developed really well in the story. the only problem is the 2nd and 3rd chapters. i think they add almost nothing to the story, and u couldve easily explained his past in another chapter.also, some of your ideas are kinda copied off of other anime, but its still mostly your own creativity. good job, but i think u can end the story where u r. |
Reviewed By: redbladeliger876 On: February 07, 2002 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was awsome i like the death rapter. you did a realy good job writing it. i write stuff with zoids too. i have competition. im really looking forwrd to reading chapter 2. |
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