| "The Reaper" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Black Dragon On: August 12, 2002 20:59 CDT
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this story is extremely well written and it adds more depth to it when you use other series. i don't see what the point of gene showing up was, maybe i will learn later in the chapters. i am writing a story of my own but it is not as nearly as done as yours is, i would like to submit it somewhere, sometime. but anyway, this story is good and this is only the beginning. i look forward to seeing what happens next. |
Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ This is a great fic! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Berserk Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 15:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the author, I just want to tell you all something about chapter. Towards the end when it tells you the coordinates of the battle, it should say 50(degree sign)N, 20(degree sign)W. You know longitude 20, latitude 20. Just wanted to clear that up, since it doesn't understand degree signs. |
Reviewed By: ss69gogeta98 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2002 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First i have to say Please Keep Writing, Don't Stop, You have a creative mind and you are a GREAT writer/author!!
I keep looking forward for more chapters. I loved what you did with Bits Liger Zero X and how it evolved with the Schneider Armor. But i was thinking what happened to Bits Liger. I can understand that Bit is older and might not battle as much as he used too, but it would be great to see it in the future, I would hate to see it just sitting around. Plus Isalina has been battling for a while, it would be interesting to evlolve her liger (maybe Panzer) or something. Thanks for a Great Story and Please Dont' Stop Writing!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool. Just want to say I think you should keep writting and kick the pandas team's butt. Girls always did rag on me constantly.
V -)---- |
Reviewed By: Child of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't like reviewing unless a story shows a lot of promise, and you of all people should know that. You really seem to be in trouble, which kinda surprises me, because you're doing a good job with the story...
But here's my idea anyway. You said that Nate will lose control whenever he hears that strange sentence, right? Well, what about his kids? Will they have the same problem? Maybe they should, especially during a battle with the enemy. I dunno...this idea isn't one of my best, so do whatever you want, Nate. -_-... |
Reviewed By: zoid-dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
better than ever. more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Child of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? You'd done a good job, as usual. I can't really help you out idea-wise (sorry) But I can give you a name for a team. How about the Marauders? (It's the name I was going to use for my own story, but I can make up another name.)If you don't like the name, I understand. |
Reviewed By: Xeno On: June 29, 2002 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just going to point something out. In the show Zoids, the Berserk Fuhrer was called the Berserk Fury because in WWII, Hitler was called Fuhrer by the Germans, and CN thought that that would offend viewers. So, just letting you know, the Berserk Fury's actual name is the Berserk Fuhrer.
On another note, this has been a very good fan fic, I'm at chapter 7 now and it's very interesting. I though it would be crap when the romance stuff started in, but now I'm suprised to brought it back to an action story (not many people can successfully do this). So keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: zoid-dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 15:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
another review from me. cool cool cool!
good job. the chapters are getting better and better. try to write more often though |
Reviewed By: jager-man-123 On: June 20, 2002 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you included the outlaw star cast into this whole story. Lots of suspense, romance, and humor. After reading this fan fiction I hope to write better stories. Keep on writing!!! |
Reviewed By: Lee Kimiya On: June 19, 2002 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT'S A GREAT STORY AND I HOPE YOU GET MORE IN SOON!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! Love, Lee |
Reviewed By: zoid-dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when i started to read this fanfic, i couldn't stop. the author is exceptionally good. better than a few professionals. |
Reviewed By: Child of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2002 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, this just keeps getting better and better... I love it! Oh, thanks for all of your reviews on my story. It has been a big help. |
Reviewed By: Mr Sarde On: April 13, 2002 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two words. Kick Ass. Oncore (I suck at spelling, i think) |
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