| "The Reaper" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cody/Hyper Saiyen Epyon On: April 03, 2002 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great idea for this fic. Keep the susspence and anticipatioon in the cliff hangers. How about finding a way for Isalina and Eric to get there own Zoids (Ultamit X's of course). Also, how about having the flashback to the time that Nate, Mayuka, and Julia go to the hot springs. |
Reviewed By: browneyes8133 On: February 24, 2002 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well think that It was a great fanfic but u didn't have to end it like that I hate that type of endings it always gets me thinking.... anyway It was really good I mean it u have talent in the writing department, keep writing okay :^p |
Reviewed By: Child of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2002 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I don't usually read crossover fanfics, but I really like this one. (I don't usually write reviews either.) I loved your style, and I like the cliffhanger ending. I hope that you get the soon-to-come daughter involved in your next story. You know, maybe get her kidnapped by an enemy or something? |
Reviewed By: laserliger On: February 19, 2002 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome fanfic. the deathraptor is awesome, and i love the idea of a QPC. i think nate was developed really well in the story. the only problem is the 2nd and 3rd chapters. i think they add almost nothing to the story, and u couldve easily explained his past in another chapter.also, some of your ideas are kinda copied off of other anime, but its still mostly your own creativity. good job, but i think u can end the story where u r. |
Reviewed By: redbladeliger876 On: February 07, 2002 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was awsome i like the death rapter. you did a realy good job writing it. i write stuff with zoids too. i have competition. im really looking forwrd to reading chapter 2. |
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