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| "Coil" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: vengeful_vixen8613 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 06:21 CST
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Again, I commend you on your writing style and your wonderful detail. Keep up the good work. :)
| Reviewed By: vengeful_vixen8613 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 05:28 CST
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Wihtout mentioning my personal pairing preferences. Let me just say that I forgive you for the Blackfire/Robin pairing and I would like to say that you are a wonderful writer, and I'm looking forward to reading more. By the way, I like the part where BB comforts Raven. :)
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 12:41 CDT
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Okay, that last bit, really freeky. Otherwise, a pretty interesting story. I liked the characterizations (though I do doubt that Dick would ever get involved with either of the Tamaaranean sisters for long (thats my personal opinion, not absolute, and that comes from reading the comics, the New Teen Titans as well as Outsiders). Still, the Darkness Dragon, where did you get that, personal creation or rip off Hiei from Yu YU Hakusho? Neh, either way, taken a bit further than done before. Anyway, keep going with this idea, it is interesting, and peronally, I'd like to see Red X actually turn into a Thief-Hero like catwoman, though it'd be really cool to see him actually get lucky (dude deserves it after having to deal with so many women fawning over everyone else; not to mention I'd like to see a background story for him, because hey, Red X is quite original, but also completely neglected). Anyway, keep on writing, the story was good, I'd like to see others continuing from this one. Anyway, peace out, later.
| Reviewed By: animejunkie101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though I have never heard of a Robin/Blackfire fic and now that I have am not overly fond, I really enjoyed this story and compliment you on your ability to create a good story for people who aren't fans of your pairings. But don't worry, I'm not one of those 'Starfire/Robin or DIE!!' types, I actually enjoy reading different pairings and you have done a wonderful job of making the reading experience enoyable. One thing that you may have to work on is paragraphs. Although it just might be the computer, and not you, paragraphs are a wonderful creation and are meant to be used! Great story and good luck with later chapters. Much Love, Animejunkie101
| Reviewed By: ChildoftheAncients On: October 18, 2005 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far; it's really good, and I have no problem with the pairing. I don't know too much about TT besides the basic characters and what little I've read, but Blackfire and Raven are probably my two favorite characters. The only problem I have is that mm.org seems to have messed up when you loaded the chapters. It's all one large paragraph. Fix the problem with the chapters, and you'll have one amazing story that's easy to read.
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