Reviewed By:Takaouto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 16:48 CDT Comment/Review: Hee. I haven't even read this chapter yet, but I saw the pairing; and I already LOVE YOU XDDDD Heart for you and your loveness of Yamcha/Vegeta. MWAH =)
Reviewed By:shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 07:56 CDT Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: There are far too few Y/V fics out there. I think I've only seen four so far aside from yours. I loved this fic. You did a great job incorporating Puar into the mix when other stories like to leave him out. You gave a nice twist with the long lost desendant. It was a wild ride and I enjoyed it. I was hooked from start to finish because I had to see how it ended. It's nice to see that the King went into shock after having to live a lie. I'm just glad everybody minus Oolong is happy. Nice work.
