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"Metallic GxL Alters" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 12, 2005 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, nice chapter. Still a little problem with formatting and such but it was good. Just a bit of advice (you don't have to take it if it sounds stupid)... parenthesses are not really necessary and they disrupt the flow of the story, IMO. Other than that, good job. ^_^
 Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 13, 2005 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, you finally registered here! :p Like demonicpride you great, vivid description which is always a good thing. Since this is only a prolouge, it's expected to be short. So I hope you update soon. ^_^
 Title: short
Reviewed By: lonly bunney of mars  On: October 08, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i didnt feel like logging in so i just wanted to look around and i came to this fic. at first it sounded like a cheesy rip off but then again dosent every thing lol? anyway the prologue was very vivid and sought out...i notice you have the same name as demonicpride34 or is it 32? are you the same? any way...keep writing*pets* and i would love to see how it turns out.

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