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| "Since When Do Heeros Have a Sense of Humor?" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: annette On: July 10, 2006 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, you have to continue this story. I would love to see who joins Armina's group next. I hope that you will let Ketric grow up. It would be interesting to see his character develop.
| Title: ^^ I just thought of something
Reviewed By: ~Ryushi Nigami~ On: June 13, 2006 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, Now that I think of it. I do have something For this story. After careful consideration, I have decided to ask you to add me! Not my characters, me. Here's my stats. Name: Moji Sanshen Moriarty Age: 17 Height: 5'11" Weight: 97 Kg Eye color: Purple (colored contacts, is nearsighted) Hair color: Blue (dyed...likes blue) Skin: Tannish Physical description: Think Samoan or Pacific Islander Clothes: Owns several black shirts from Ambiguous clothing company, 2 Baggy khaki cargos, 3 baggy Jnco jeans, pleather sport coat, Van's sneakers with a 3D pattern (I actually own these), black army boots Accessories: cool shades, a PD glove (Personal Dimension glove (can pull out of and store objects into an infinite personal dimension. bought it first chance he got)), sweatdrop sign, Stored in PD space: tessen, mallet, frying pan, wooden bat, wiffle bat, vase, large squeaky hammer, a glass bottle, extra pairs of cool shades, electric guitar, Mallet-sama, Hammer4, WmAs, WMAs, WmDs, Icha Icha Paradise, Staff, Kitchen sink, laptop, yugioh collection, yugioh decks, yo-yo, one of those cool cloaks from Kingdom Hearts 2, computer mouse nunchuks, kunai, shuriken, Fuuma shuriken, Bishi balls, marbles, tootsie roll pops, DS, PSP, Playing cards, calculator, Bottle Rockets, matches, ice, Dr. Pepper, Cash (well, whatever cash he has at the moment), Dice of all shpaes and sizes, 20 gig MP3 player, Toothbrush, Toothpaste, Soap, Shampoo, Deoderant, Cologne, Hairspray, Blue Hair dye, extra contacts, Hairgel, Shampoo, Squirt bottle, Pocky, and explosive tags. Personality: He is quite possibly the most random man you will ever meet. However, in spite of his randomness, he is quite sane and comprehensively analyzing every situation. he is addicted to Pocky (is rarely seen without one in his mouth), Anime, Manga, Shy girls, and ninja. He is also quite versed in the weaponry that he uses (namely, the kunai, shuriken, fuuma shuriken, and sword) and fond of his explosive tags (he bought them in surplus from the Naruto Territory, along with the kunai, shuriken, and fuuma shuriken). However, he despises people who can't get over their prejudices and is a safe haven for half-bishies. in fact, he has made fanfiction based in Bishi World, in which he created a family of Half-Bishi Trainers (the de'Ryu clan) that is quite prominent in Bishi World (in his stories). He travels the land, hoping to bump into his Half bishi trainer characters and making friends along the way. Bishies: Nodoka-san (Mahou Sensei Negima), Negi-san (Mahou Sensei Negima) (He caught the two of them as a pair, since they appeared to be a couple. He caught Negi first and Nodoka actually attacked him), Hinata-san (with Temari's attitude), Naruto-chan-san (the female form of Naruto (second episode of Naruto has a scene in which Naruto changes into his female henge but keeps his clothes. that Naruto-chan)), Jing-san, Train-san (Train Heartnet, from Black Cat), and Nanashi-sama (from Marchen Awakens Romance. it's a new series by Nobuyuki Anzai, the guy who did Recca)(Moji only caught Nanashi by accident, when Moji tripped over a root as he was throwing a Bishie ball at a Dorothy-san (also from MAR (as it's known))and throwing it into the bushes by mistake, where Nanashi was hiding). In any case, if you need any of my other character profiles, just look at my profile page on Fanfiction.net. You should know where I am. If you use Moji, that would be awesome. if you get rid of the list of Bishi and use him for something else, that too is fine by me. If you don't use him at all, I will be disappointed, but not totally crushed. ^^ I'll get over it. Ja ne! ~Ryushi Nigami~ (also found on FF.net under the same name)
| Title: Hey! it's me! Ryushi!
Reviewed By: Ryushi Nigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Armina-sama! Long time, no read! I didn't know oyu had a media miner account...Perhaps I should put some of my stories on here, too. I already have the account. Wait, I'm in this story, right? XD Mwahahahaha!
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: gimeGohan On: May 28, 2006 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was me! I love you! I feel so honored!! *bows* this, is a great story, kep it up! Try to read my story on FF.net, it'll be under the name gimeGohan. Love!!! *glomps Shin* Don't ya love Bishies with strange appearances? Most of my favorites aren't human in one way or another. Anyway, keep up the good work! And update soon!
| Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Scarletty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Wow I LOVE this fic, you absolutely have to write more I'm begging you. I loved it, Its soo cool please, you have totally got me hooked. This is so original I've never read anything like this before its so brillant please write more. I love Ketric he's soo adorable and Armina (is that your real name) you rock. Please *begs pitifully* please I just have to read more its just way to good. I really would hate to go all Omea O korosu on ya *pulls out gun, aims then places pen and paper on a table* Please write more. Please. Cya'z P.s Lol you spend a week or two with Heero and he's totally in love with ya and Relena spends two years chasing him lol you go girl. Sayaonara x
| Reviewed By: Adnilem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually started reading this about a week ago but did'nt get to finish it until tonight. I very rarely read anything other than slayers fanfics lately, but this was really good to, it makes me laugh and I like seeing some of the other characters i like. It make me very happy if you somhow put Xellos and Filia in her tho. The character list was also a big help as there were a few chacters I did'nt recognize. Anyway just wanted to say it's a great fanfic and I'm looking forward to reading more. n_n
| Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is too bloody hilarious. I never thought Pokemon could be bastardized so well (no annoying 12 yr old runts with one word Pokemon -_-'). My only thing is..do you realize that two of your chapters are the same? I think it is 6 and 7. Might want to fix that. Otherwise, too bloody funny and I can't wait for an update ;D
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