| "A Hearts Goodbye" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Fan69 On: November 29, 2008 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is flawed. You need line breaks. It lacks fluidity. You are a penis.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was my favorite story yet omg im crying now i felt the same feeling kagome flt (besides the dieing part)i never felt heart broken untill i started to read stories like these i love your work!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was my favorite story yet omg im crying now i felt the same feeling kagome flt (besides the dieing part)i never felt heart broken untill i started to read stories like these i love your work!
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Reviewed By: xxbritnexx (Not Logged In) On: April 18, 2006 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best song-fics i've read.
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