Title: FFARG Review Ch. 5 Reviewed By:Chibi Halo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 02:21 CST Comment/Review: Thank you for submitting your piece to FFARG. You have a well written chapter. I like the way you focus on the characters for a while before diving into the battle scenes. You take the time to show the readers how your characters interact with one another outside of the battles with other Digimon and it works well for your piece. You have a good grasp of grammar and the chapter moves at a good pace and flows well. Your chapter shows a great attention to detail and that you've taken the time to give it a good once over before uploading it. The chapter was enjoyable to read and I didn't mind the section of Central and South American foods your character ate. I liked that your explanation of the foods they were eating actually taught the reader something about the food rather than telling them what it was. The extra details make the story all the more enjoyable to read. Keep up the wonderful work. Thank you again for submitting your piece to FFARG.
