| "Just One Night" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Blue Utopiah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. You set up the scenes with incrdible details - I could easily see the restaurant in front of me - and the revelation of Tsuzuki's past was well-thought out. I love the way Muraki taunts Tsuzuki throughout the lemon - it was incredibly hot and yet disturbing. Well-done!
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Reviewed By: Kay-sama On: November 01, 2005 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was one of the best fics I've ever read! That was truly amazing and I applaud you *applause* ....very kinky *_* in a good way (?) ^^ and I liked how you tied it all up! I love Muraki isn't he so fabulous! ^^ Thank you for a truly wonderful fanfic!!! *bows*
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Reviewed By: FoxyG On: October 16, 2005 05:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW. That was quite nicely written. The Lemon was great. Though I wasn't fond of the ending.... D: Too saaaaad. Why couldn't Tsu go run away with Muraki or something? >->;; xDDD; Yeah, ending; definate turn off. You kidna introduced the darkness at an akward place. I was expecting some nice sex scene, but instead got more of a rape scene... x-x; Be more careful of that next time, be more consistent on theme throughout the whole thang. Good job, though. One of the only worthwhile fanfics out there, I say. :3
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 09:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was very interesting and wonderfully done.
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