| "Tiresome Lies" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: AWSOME
Reviewed By: trey960 On: October 22, 2008 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you described it so effortlessly.i could picture all that happening. you a great writer please do annother. ill be sure to read and review it.
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Reviewed By: Inuluver66613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! You should make it longer! haha Inuyasha! Even though I like Inuyasha and Kagome pairing I have always thought of her with Bankotsu, mainly because he is like perfect, but yeah. I love this story! I think you should make it a full length story and i would love to read a lemon on them!
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Title: SWEEEEET!
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the first ban/kag i've read and I love it! Inuyasha got what he deserved!! BWAHAHAHAHA!! You could definitely lengthen it into a longer story, but for a one-shot I like it! YOU MUST CONTINUE!!! I NEED TO READ MORE!!! MWAHAHAHAHA HAA!! HAA!! Now i take my leave.^_^ *flies away on a broomstick*
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 17:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I've only read one Ban/Kag fic before, so I think this is all right. You could definitely lengthen it into a longer story, but for a one-shot -- I like it!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: kagomerocks241 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update this fanfic is so cool. I want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its okay, but i dont think that Bankotsu should have just gone back with the others. I think it would have been better to keep them in suspence, or write a letter or somthing along those lines. ne way its pretty good. ^_~
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Title: I LOVED IT!! IN 1-10 I GIVE IT A 55!!! :D
Reviewed By: Iwantkoga [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!! haha! inuyasha got what he deserved!! FWAHAHAHAHA!! lol....heh im not a kikyo fan at all- for all i are she can burn in hell! **and eventually- she does!!**does a happy dance***** On the plus side- bankotsu's HOT!!! lol.. hm **ponders 2 myself* i wonder how koga'll react to this?** :D U....MUST....WRITE....MORE!!!!I BEG OF YOU!! PLEASE!!!!!! *bows low to you- ill be taking my leave now- *bow bow bow** bye!
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