| "Tenkuu" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tohru On: September 27, 2003 15:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is it too late to beg you to make this a MiraiTrunks/Serena fic? Well I hope you will continue fast!
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Reviewed By: Ro On: September 24, 2003 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like veggie/usa pairing. good story though.
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Reviewed By: strawberry bunnie On: January 26, 2003 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea! u need 2 finish the story!!!! but i think it should be a serena/gohan or trunks fic!!! well keep on writhing!!
ja'ne |
Reviewed By: Saturngarnet On: September 28, 2002 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it.But I want to know what happens next.I think it would be cool if Goku fell in love with Serena.Cause if u ask me the too are a lot alike.I mean they'er both diwits and to sympatheic.But if u don't like that idea then make it a Vegeta and Serena one. |
Reviewed By: Saturngarnet On: September 28, 2002 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it.But I want to know what happens next.I think it would be cool if Goku fell in love with Serena.Cause if u ask me the too are lot alike.I mean they'er both diwits and to trusting. |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2002 18:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
more! gohan/sarena(usagi) more! were the hell are you i want more! |
Reviewed By: emoo On: August 26, 2002 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is so far the best i've read and i hope Gohan and Tenkuu (serena) get together really soon. pleas write more really soon |
Reviewed By: chibichibikawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2002 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! I enjoyed it! Kudos 2 u on the blind part, I have never read that in a fic before! Kudos in oiginality. |
Reviewed By: Mel On: July 20, 2002 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the pairing should be Gohan/Serena and I
think you should erase Mamoru and put Trunks
because after what he did she shouldn't be
in the list. |
Reviewed By: nissa On: July 20, 2002 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i actually liked it...i usually hate it when someone puts another toon in with dragonball...but this kinda fit...i guess with the moon and everything...and she should definately end up with future trunks...i usually go for vegita...but in this case i just can't picture it...but once again...really nice job |
Reviewed By: Yue Moonstone On: July 15, 2002 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is really good. I hope you write more, and make it a Usagi/Vegeta fic. There are hardly many fan fiction stories with them together. It would be nice if Gohan was her twin brother.
Ciya,
Yue |
Reviewed By: britt On: January 01, 2003 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a really good story and a i hope you finish it soon!!! I also think you should put gohan and usagi together!!
well see ya
britt |
Reviewed By: rino_serenity On: June 12, 2002 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue writing i want to finish this it is really good |
Reviewed By: Eo On: May 31, 2002 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey very good i love it and i want to read more so up date soon. I'll be checking for up dates and as for the pairing i think it should be gohan. NE Way just up date ok. Eo |
Reviewed By: Alison Alexander On: April 25, 2002 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story.Vegeta/Serena please,or make Vegeta her brother. |
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