| "Out of the Frying Pan" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Love it, must have more!
Reviewed By: Ryushi Nigami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You! I wish to see more of this delicious story! You must write, quickly! Just joshing ya, man. Anytime is a good time to put up the next chapter. I'm in no hurry.
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Title: manwithnolife
Reviewed By: manwithnolife [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is shaping up to be a realy good story :). I'm not that 'learned' in the ranma/A!MG x-over, but i dont think ive ever seen this idea before, its a good one too :). ummm, so anyways i guess just update soon, cuz ill be waiting!
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Reviewed By: anss123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 12:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Your story is well written and has a lot of potential; the only pitfall I see is that it can get a little dark/boring. My suggestion is to give the demons a reason for exciting beyond 'we are evil' or 'we are power-hungry'. Perhaps if there were no demons life would turn stale and boring, (as the godygody gods would slowly weed out everything negative.)
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Reviewed By: Jeap [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 06:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable read. No comment on it being 'boring,' some stories take time to build up. In fact that is how it should work and chapter two is not the place for the climax. Mara was exquisitly written. She is not a mushy feely woman and you've got her character spot on. Ranma to, for that matter. What you're focusing on is small yet profound enough to lead to some interesting changes. All in all, it looks like this will be quite the story when you're finished.
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Reviewed By: Wizard Surreal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fun! Love it and can't wait for the next chapter! Yay, Mara's gonna get Ranma in the sack! *musing* or is it the other way around...? No matter.. I understand the death epitah (who wouldn't) and it's pretty ironic about the wings ... he's either talking about angels or Saffron... ... ... I think the latter... Does Mara know he took down Saffron (even if he wasn't at full power)? I don't think she does - or maybe I haven't read everything. Anyway, Great Story and Really look forward to reading the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 11:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Warp hit my feelings on the head, but just like him, I got hooked on the teaser at the end of Chapter 2. Can't wait for more!
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Title: Chapters 1 and 2
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 00:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Solidly written, but up to this point, pretty boring. The final bit of chapter 2 suggests that things will get more interesting. I was lamenting that I was getting absolutely no sense of Ranma's real feelings when you revealed the content of his death poem. Good twist.
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