| "Fireworks" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: free-sprit ( to lazy to log in... ) On: June 30, 2005 08:10 CDT
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why haven't I ever read this story? I thought I had read all of you stories! Nice! Keep'em comming. And by that, I mean the stories. *grinns* .. Oh, and what is special about july 4th? Am I just stupid, or something, cause I don't know what's suppose to happen that day... Buut, I live in Denmark, so I guess that I have an excuse. right?
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Reviewed By: swissmiss On: June 25, 2004 00:16 CDT
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amazing.
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Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 23:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Gotta love those rhetorical questions. |
Reviewed By: Lo On: October 26, 2002 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, I wish I had the guts to write a lemon! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 15, 2002 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hell that was one good fic!!!!!!!!!!! whoho, Go Girl!!
I loved that one shot story =)))))))
the lemon was real good, you served the name well ;)
Vegeta wasn't that OOC like he is in other stories, hmm lucky Bulma...
anyway way to go, keep it up!
kiss. |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 20:54 CDT
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*Sigh* If only I were gutsy enough to get a Vegeta tattoo on my back! 8-)
As usual, another great lemon! I love how you made him 'tease' Bulma at first.
Meliza |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a true firework story. I just love all the colors. Bulma character made me laugh my head off. anyways, on one of my stories, I suggest that people read this, hope it is alright with you. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2001 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Vegeta is so hot and that lemon proved it. Makes every girl wish she was Bulma *Sighs dreamily*. I hope you have more because it wouldn't be fair to tease us like that now would it? WOW! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2001 23:21 CST
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that lemon blew me away!!! His Royal Sexiness is portrayed almost TOO PERFECTLY here!
if you've got more, you know we're willing to read them! |
Reviewed By: bulma On: December 02, 2001 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great LEMON.in fact that was the best one i've read please please write some more |
Reviewed By: hey hey On: October 31, 2001 03:50 CST
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wow vegita was in perfect charictor that was great |
Reviewed By: W-Chan On: November 22, 2001 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoah, Bulma is a lucky woman! Great job on the lemon. It's amazing to see authors that can write a lemon with what seems to be great ease. I hope that I can learn to do the same someday. You are obviously a talented writer. Keep up the good work! |
