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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 16:10 CDT
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I read this all at once, and I'm glad, because if I had to read it in installments, I think I would have bothered you to madness to find out what was going to happen. My first guess at the lover's identity was Crawford, then Farf, and you nipped that in the bud very neatly. I think you balance the fic well, keeping the surprise without it taking away from the real point, which to me was Schuldig escaping and finding a true home. I don't want to give any spoilers, so I won't mention names, but looking back, I do think domestic viloence is in character, and I can see it happening. I'm so sorry about your friend.
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Title: *waves little "Aya Heart Youji" flags*
Reviewed By: Nariel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 04:35 CDT
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Omi. Wee lil OMI?!?!?! *bangs head against table repeatedly* Nonononono.... but... HOW?! Was that a kind of sick revenge of his for Schu having a hand in his sister dying? *shuddder* I mean... Oh boy. Whoa. I'm speechless. No wait, am not. "TAKATORI, SHI-NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!" *nods* Go, Nagi.
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Title: whee
Reviewed By: Nariel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 04:16 CDT
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*winces* Go, Schwarz! I'm only at, what, chapter 4? But I already love this fic. And the grown-up Nagi(insert fangirly squeal here) especially. The moral of this story: Never, EVER piss off assassins with supernatural abilities named Schwarz. I so wanna see them rip to pieces whoever did that to MY Schu-Schu! T_T
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Reviewed By: Lady Bear On: July 27, 2006 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was sooooooo good. I never would have pictured Schu being the abused one in a relationship insted of the abuser. Oh , this story was wonderful. I'm so sorry about you're freind. No one should deserve that . I'll pray for her.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 16:27 CDT
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I think I have to go with the consensus--I thought it was going to be Yohji. And I wasn't prepared to belive that. But once I get past Omi the genki chibi to what he would have grown into--yeah, I can see it. this story is awesome, love. You should be very proud. Thank you for going through what you did, to write this.
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Reviewed By: bloodredroses1 On: January 29, 2006 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! Up until the very moment you let us know it was Omi I was so scared I could have been shaking since I'm such a HUGE Yohji fan. Even so I was shocked as hell at it being Omi. This was a great story & I will be reading more of your writing.
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: December 19, 2005 23:07 CST
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i'm glad that schu was able to get some kind of closure and i hope that in writing this fic you were able to get some too. *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 22:50 CST
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well damn, sweetie. i don't even know what to say. short, but intense. emotionally exhausting, poignant and exceptionally well written. wow. damn.
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Reviewed By: NekoKitty On: December 08, 2005 16:59 CST
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WtF ??? :blinks in shock: .... Wow. I loved it, espically the twist in the end.
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Reviewed By: NekoKitty On: December 08, 2005 16:58 CST
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WtF ??? :blinks in shock: ....
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 10:10 CST
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Oh, gods! It says a lot about your writing that I made it through the whole thing, especially when I thought that you were disparaging my favorite bishie! But, you kept me enthralled and I survived and I'm not disappointed! Well done as always.
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Reviewed By: Schmetterling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 09:59 CST
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AAAh! Omi! Wow this was a great fic . I was thinking it was Yotan ,but you surprised me.So sad,but i love it anyway .
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Reviewed By: britestorm On: November 04, 2005 18:02 CST
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interesting soo glad it wasn't Yohji.I love him and was worried it would be.Never really cared about Omi or Ken though
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Reviewed By: CC On: November 04, 2005 13:00 CST
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Please tell me that's not the end! If so, you are a very cruel person. Love the end of this chapter though, very interesting. Never liked Omi much anyway. I really hope that this isn't the end.
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: November 04, 2005 06:34 CST
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you know since the only clue you gave was 'blonde' I was going to have to kill you if it was yohji and I kept reading and squirming and whispering threats in my head if it was my lovely yotan, and then it was omi and I couldn't help but feel relieved. hehe. But I knew you had to make it one of Weiss, hmm not so white are they. Oh I kinda fell asleep super early last night so I haven't had a chance to look at my email yet
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