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| "Pureboi Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: spiritshinobi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo. Work on spelling. Its a pretty good story but the skip from breast sizes is confusing. Also, you have Kagome liking InuYasha first, then hating him, then liking him in dodgeball, then hating him again the rest of the time, which I didnt understand at all. A good story with potential, provided you update often.
| Reviewed By: Saga On: October 21, 2005 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the japanese needs a little tweeking... like OOGAMI is definitely not WOLF... it should read OOKAMI... and then there's the skip between Kagome's chest size... like in the opening it said C-cup and somewhere in the bus scene it said E-cup so I'm having a time of it picturing this AU Kagome... other than that it's pretty good and I liked it so far.
| Title: Are you serious?
Reviewed By: Are you serious? On: October 21, 2005 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you serious, e-cup breasts? No man will want those, they're just to big. Or maybe you didn't know that. That and she has to be fat to have breasts as big as that or have implants. Goodness, I only hope you were playing. I read that part and just had to Review you. Please, next time don't be so, so, 7th grade.
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