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| "Taking care of you" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Kitsune0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 07:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so exciting! Por favor (Please) continue.
| Reviewed By: Hieis1RFG [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 00:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Sweet... I can see it now... He's like "What's with this red hand mark on my face?" and you're all like "Um... don't kill me?"...
| Reviewed By: Deathstra [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 13:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the idea, in a way, is very good and I like it, but I have a few suggestions (oh and please don't start with "I must hate it and it sucks" okay? I'm only saying my oppinion and merely suggesting a few things by stateing out the facts. And that's what reviews are for in the first place...not only to keep repeating "Ow wow, please update" *rolls eyes*). Namely - the way the "you" character reacts is a bit unreal...at least so I see it. If I'd suddenly find an actual anime character on my porch, I'd freak out big time, not only from the sight itself, but because of all the questions that arise (How? Does it mean demons ARE real? Is bishounen Youko here too!?!? WTF is going on!?!?! etc) and the whole situation would seem way to unreal, which would make me think I'm delusional. And because "you" reacted so calmly and blankly, it made me raise an eyebrow - how numb is the character?!...plus, if Hiei would be bleeding/dieing in my house, I would never ever have the time to even think on the time or what I've missed, let alone mess with the computer and then simply fall asleep(unless I'm really exchausted)...and I still don't get it what you did with that soap. Applyed it to his wounds? (Man that must've hurt) Seriously, cleaning someones wounds doesn't mean literally washing em with soap!!! It does more damage...Nevertheless, like I mentioned before, the story is well written and has no other major flaws in it...keep up the good work and I'll eagerly await for your updates! :)
| Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOhhh you just have to continue this story its sooo good.
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