|"In The Beginning." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ]|
| Reviewed By: Mike03 On: October 28, 2005 15:21 CDT|
This is a very promising start. There really aren't enough Sesshomaru fics out there. So far, you've managed to keep him in character, which a lot of people can't do. Keep it up.
| Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 11:55 CDT|
Ahhhhh!!!!!!! i love this story! good job newbie... and don't get all dishearted by the meger reviews, when i started my first fic i got like 5 reviews in like 7 chapters. now there are ten chapters in that fic and like 33 reveiws... it just takes paicence... and guilting people into writing O.o good luck and keep writing!
| Reviewed By: icygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 13:34 CDT|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
i have always wondered what happened between sesshoumaru and rin since their first meeting because the manga and the anime doesn't help much because there aren't so many details!so please keep on going on this fiction and don't give up on it i find it very very great! bye and see you soon i hope!
| Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 12:47 CDT|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
I really like it so far. It's always interesting to read people's interpretations on the internal aspect of just how the unlikely pair got together. I haven't noticed any glaring spelling errors and just a few punctuation mistakes, so good on you! :D My only suggestion is to try to put spaces between the individual sentences, as them being so crowded makes it look cramped and unpolished.
| Reviewed By: Shieala On: October 24, 2005 09:36 CDT|
Next chapter, please!!!!!