Reviewed By:Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 08:12 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Awesome ficlet :) I've been looking for some Yourichi/Soi Fon. Thier story is so sweet, and they have such chemistry. I really like how you've done this -- it's true to the characters and quite entertaining. The only critique I have is about the tense... I think that maybe past tense might have worked better than present. The present tense seems to distract from the plot a bit. That's all :) Thanks for a wonderful story! I'd love to see more YoruSoi from you.
