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| "Requiem of a Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Wonderful work ^^
Reviewed By: shadow-of-me On: May 06, 2006 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very fascinating reading your first chapter, the grammer errors irretated me a bit though. But in other ways I do not spell as good as you do, neither do I have the vocabulary you have. (I had to look up a few words, shame on me -_-) But I would be very pleased if you continued your work, I might not be a member, but I know when I read an outstanding piece of ART, I do hope your story progresses.
| Reviewed By: Bliksem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, I don't understand why the best of fanfictions don't receive the reviews. This is an incredible work, I believe, and you show very good control over your words. The length, for the style, is wonderful, too, because that sort of language is exhaustive as the reader continues to read. Yet this is at a great length. However, I do believe that too many paragraphs were redundant in the use of a Pronoun to start off. Perhaps a little more variety in the starts of your paragraphs would be incredible. There were a few spelling/grammar errors, but those are more or less excusable. Everyone makes them. Thanks for the great story!
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