| "Side Effects: heiwa no Jutsu" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: MaleficentAngel On: August 20, 2017 01:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely loved this fic! So fucking good!! Thankyou so much for
writing it 😙
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Reviewed By: Balos On: August 04, 2011 22:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Perfect. You gave me hours of laughter and love. Thank you. |
Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: liferhapsody [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh loved this! in so many levels. I really hope this isn't the end of it :( Is there a sequel somewhere out there? Eiher way, this was awesome! great job!
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Reviewed By: Aisatsana Shiba On: July 19, 2007 12:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So funny. Really good. What is the sequel called and where can I find it?
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Reviewed By: Lilyanne On: May 16, 2007 16:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great story!
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 06:22 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Little more graphic than I usually enjoy but still very amusing! I've read the mirror series that crosses this with the Kakashi Mission and enjoyed that too though it mentioned a sequal to this?
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Reviewed By: Jessie731 On: March 31, 2007 18:29 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazingly funny. I think I'm internally bleeding from trying to muffle my laughter so I won't wake my roommate. YOU WIN LIFE. I haven't finished it yet but am working on it now. And why have you left ff.net? Is this posted there?
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Reviewed By: Carthae On: November 29, 2006 16:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iruka glanced at the clock. Craaaaap! A whole ten minutes. Oh, screw it. "I got lost". ... Kakashi rubbing off on him, maybe ? In all the (wrong) ways, of course... Gotta read the following chapters, but not tonight. Thanks for the fic, it makes me laugh, and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: NikoleKeyes On: November 23, 2006 03:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Glad I found the archived version of this =) For some reason, I really likd the last few lines of this chapter (Chapter 7). In fact, I kinda liked this whole chapter a lot. The kakairu is still new - they're still fumbling around in the dark a little bit - and the rest of the village is beginning to get interested. The gossip is always fun to hear, considering Kakashi and Iruka are *quite* the couple! I really like how lighthearted this fic is most of the time. Unexpectedly, I like your little ANs throughout the story, even though they're not parenthetical. They're actually funnier the way they are. In any case, I'm really excited to read the rest of this story! I'll review every few chapters to let you know I'm still thoroughly enjoying it *g* Deanna
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Reviewed By: tama-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 23:13 PDT
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So.....long.....to....read....But I loved it anyway. Your story is awesome and I love Kashi in it.
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Reviewed By: tingel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 12:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I spent the weekend devouring this! It's hilarious and hot as hell! I liked the small details you put in there about shinobi life. You really thought about it, didn't you? And the sidecomments! Really cracked me up. Hadn't had such a good weekend in a while. This story is on the list of my all-time favourites. If you ever write something else, I'm gonna read it. Thanks a LOT for sharing!
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Title: Mmija711@wmconnect.com
Reviewed By: Mija711 On: October 07, 2006 05:56 PDT
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omg you have NOOOOOOO idea how long it took me to read this, it took 4DAYS!..not straight but the time I spent on the comp was ALOT, I realized after I raed your colab with JB on The Mirror thingy, that I missed someting, stupid me I thought it was the same SE with Iruka prego, but that didnt make sense with the colab so I got the links and found this and omg you had me busting a gut and hacking out a lung, this was chalk ful of smex and insanity and I soooooooo loved it alot, I almost had a hart attack whenever I couldnt finish it at NIGHT, till tonight, im tired, I started around 6pm at chapter 11 and just finished, its 552am, ok I had to take a break for an hour but you get my point, couldnt stop reading, it was WONDERFUL, I love it and your colabs are truelly hilarious, ty ty ty for the awesome read, totally loved it soo much, cant wait for the sequel and why Iruka adopts skunks lol, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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Reviewed By: strykebak [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 17:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you can't just leave us hanging!!! pleeeeeeease continue! you are such a good writer! it's hard to find humor and talent in the same place. i am guessing nonstop how you're going to end it. though my speculation will undoubtedly fall short of the real thing once it arrives. this isn't a demand, but definitely begging. no, i'm not too proud to beg.
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Title: Good F**king God
Reviewed By: jackyalien On: August 02, 2006 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG OMFG OMFG i just spend the last two days reading this all night that i would go to sleep at 7 am..OMFG the damn best piece of writing I've ever read, also the longest one. God it was just chapter 2 and i was already crying I was laughing soo hard. and the sex "talk" with fake Iruka was priceless. god this is the most halarious shit I've ever read. i really hope you didnt forget about this fic. cause im so addicted. man I sped the last two days dreaming either about kakashi and iruka sex or dreaming about how to get sakura to leave naruto and sasuke alone...but a threesum is not as bad as having naruto end up with sakura alone so...yeah.. once again OMFG!
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Reviewed By: Slippery Liz On: April 25, 2006 18:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha! I've been trying to find this fic ever since ff.net kicked you off. Meanwhile, you've added four chapters of highly excellent porn and hilarity. This right here is good fic.
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