| "Powerful Guardian Turned Spy" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
Reviewed By: Irish Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could understand what you were writing u weren't just rating or jumping from one thing to another. please update soon
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Reviewed By: a_MikoS_heartache [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, very nice.... im soo glad that kagome is a strong character in this fic, i wish i found that in other stories i've read. please update soon
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: Youko's Dish [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 22:59 CST
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uh-oh they pulled a Kagome! :D
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: January 20, 2008 05:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this!!! please keep writing cause this is a really good story!!!!
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Reviewed By: diamond in the sky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ypur story. It is sooo good.
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Reviewed By: Mrs Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 15:18 CDT
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Plzzzzzzzzz udate. I wanna know if Hiei is inlove if he isn't up for grabs I'll claim him, If he is no longer on the shevles then I'll be with Kurama. ^_^ ~_~
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Title: Powerful Gaurdian turned spy
Reviewed By: Jonessa Salas On: August 03, 2006 05:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY ITS SO COOL AND FANTASIC,KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND PLEASE KEEP WRITING.
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Title: Powerful Guardian Turned Spy
Reviewed By: The Devils Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UP-DATE PLEAS!!!!!!!!!!!!! PPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!! UUUUUUUPPPPPPP-DDDDDDDDAAAAAATTTTTEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bloodcherry [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 21:32 CDT
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This is a verry weird crossover, but I like it nonetheless! It's original, but I would LOVE to know the pairings!! Kagome/? Yukina/? Keiko/yusuke? WHO KNOWS?! Anyway... I would love a kagome/kurama pairing, but I really want this story to be your style so you pick the pairings. Ja ne! =3
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!! please update soon...
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Reviewed By: South American Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 15:40 CDT
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Thiz iz really ud, just watch for spelling, i think i spotted some errors! KEEP IT UP!
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Reviewed By: Irish Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great please update soon, i can't wait.
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Reviewed By: sugar high water ma (not logged in) On: December 29, 2005 22:25 CST
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great chapter!! I wonder what's going to happen next, i bet that Kogome will freak when Koemna tries to contact Yusuke. ~Uma =^-^=
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Reviewed By: Dragons of Hells Flame On: December 29, 2005 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! by the way.......WHERE THE HELL IS KIRARA?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? DID U FORGET HER OR SOMETHING CUZ U HAVEN'T MENTIONED HER AT ALL 4 AWHILE!!!!!!!!!! ok........good chapter update soon!!! Oh! u should have them be WHOOPED while Hiei watching them it would be soooo funny!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragons of Hells Flame On: December 06, 2005 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story!!! by the way what are the pairings?? i would be really great if it were a Hiei/Kag pairing. plz!!!!!!! and WHERE IS KIRARA??? u need to put her back in the story!! and can kagome be a element demon, angel, Inu demon and a forbidden child, that would be soooo cool if she were. well anyways update soon.
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Reviewed By: sugar high water uma (not logged in) On: November 22, 2005 17:49 CST
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Very good chapter, kinda random but funny none the less. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sugar high water uma (not logged in) On: November 13, 2005 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, but please proofread your work Before updating, cause you spelledalot of names incorrectly. And update soon, or i'll sic my muffins on you. Mwhahahahahaha~Hackcough~hairball
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Reviewed By: Lost Lilly of the Lone [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 02:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Reall good story so far. I have never seen anything like it before. It made me smile so i gave it a nine and nine for both of those factors.
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Reviewed By: hiei/kaglover On: November 04, 2005 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! who are the parings?? can it PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE BE A HIEE/KAGOME PARING!!!!!!PLEASE PLEASE!!! oh! and did u forget about kirara? becuz u haven't mentioned her. anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl(nli) On: November 04, 2005 22:25 CST
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wow, you're one lean mean, fanfic writing machine. ^^ update again soon please.
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Reviewed By: lacy, aka sugar high water uma On: November 04, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is sooo god, and those three girls, if they are Sam, Alex and Clover, then you got all the outfits wrong. Clover has Short hair and a red outfit. Sam has red hair down to her butt and a green outfit with barely any freakles. and Alex has short black hair with a golden outfite. and the eye colors as is follows, Sam=Green, Clover=Blue and Alex=Brown. Just so you know, it's a very good story and please update it soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl (nli) On: November 04, 2005 16:51 CST
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O.O I didn't review the first chapter? oops....well, anyways, it's really good, update soon please. could've sworn I reveiwed....tiem for my meds, excuse me
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Reviewed By: Hiei/KagLOVER4EVER On: November 04, 2005 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. i never seen this type of crossover! update really soon please. oh! can this be a Hiei/Kagome crossover PLEASE! PLEASE! oh! can u maybe like have Kagome be a demon say like a forbidden child that would be so cool and she could train with Genaki(sp?)PLEASE PLEASE!!! UPDATE SOON!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 07:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, thats good, so far, so its another yyh-iy crossovers? lolz ... can dis b a hiei/kagome pairing?? plz!?
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Reviewed By: dawnstar28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...love the story so far, i have neva seen a totally spies/iy crossover....and i gotta say that i love it! i read your profile.....and im just gonna guess that you skipped a couple of grades right? cuz it says your 13, but yet ur a freshman...me 2(class of '09, oh yeah), and i just turned 15 and im one of the oldest in my grade.....so, wow, congrats to you, you got brains girl! keep up on the story, cuz i love it! -dawn-
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Reviewed By: Araigeasa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great idea! I wanted to do an IY totally spies crossover. but I wussed out. anyways, I'm putting this on my fave list. Great job, looking forward to the next chapter.
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