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| "Saiyan Foster Father" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: butterflyV On: December 27, 2006 17:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Have you considered doing a sequel to this? It doesn't have to have a lot of action, you could have it post-winning a big battle where things are calm for the moment. I'd love to read about Raditz and Nappa's respective brats being born. Loved the chapter about the saiyans in the moonlight, would love to see another one, but without "interuptions" LOL. Also, I thought that Raditz and Atomique taking on Goku's adoptive surname was a better idea than the one in "Royal Namekian Blues" cause it's less of a mouthful if you know what I mean. And considering how they're both brothers, having the same surname would make more sense.
| Title: great work!
Reviewed By: MsStarchild On: August 26, 2006 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finished the whole thing (what you have so far---excellent!! Very interested to see how this plays out! Your buddy Shea
| Title: Heya
Reviewed By: bulma_the_babe On: December 06, 2005 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey girl, Just read the most recent chapters of this story and I have to say that they are absolutely amazing as usual! I LOVE the pool scene! Great job!!! cant wait til Gene shows up ;) keep me posted!!! Your fav. fan Christine
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