| "This Viscous Cycle of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: critical eyes
Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 18:44 CDT
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Holy shit, I can´t believe that I found this story just now. You are an amazing writer really, there are only few authors here who has the same talent like you, to express feelings so that the reader thinks they are his own. I thank you for this wonderful piece of art and for the Kagome&Kouga pairing without bashing Inuyasha ore OOC behaviours. Actually I always wanted her to finally open her eyes and to grow up. I will never understand why Rumiko created a character like Kagome, to accept being second to a dead person. Really, she is a girl from modern Japan and with her looks could have anyone if she really wanted to. She is just too stubborn and naiv to let him go, and Inuyaha is not a dream guy in my opinion (not only because of Kikyou).
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Title: I love your fic!
Reviewed By: Sesshyaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic... and sorry if I can't help you with the little's girl name... Sorry if i spell something wrong... I'm from Latinoamerica and I don't speak english very well... (si alguien entiende espanhol espero que me pueda ayudar...) Great job with your fic!!! Bye!! Sessh...
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Reviewed By: Redunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 12:24 CDT
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Alana - The bright fair one, the beautiful child. Another name for your character.
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Reviewed By: Redunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 12:19 CDT
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Sorry, I meant Yasu means tranquil. That is the name I meant to post.
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Reviewed By: Redunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 12:16 CDT
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I love this story. As for the girls name, how about Yuma? It means tranquil.
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Reviewed By: Redunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. The third chapter made me cry. I hope you continue the plot soon.
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Tijiya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another wonderful chapter. I love how she thought about Kouga's feelings for her and the way Ginta and Hakkaku looked out for her whenever around. You had a wonderful outlook in this chapter. It was deffinately enjoyable to read! Please, keep up the great work!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Tijiya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic. It was nicely written and quite enjoyable to read! I loved the ending, it was unexpected and perfect! He fainted! I loved that! Great job! ~Tijiya
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