| "A sixth Mew!?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Kaitlin On: June 14, 2007 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write another 1 i want 2 read more!
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Reviewed By: mewgirl On: July 06, 2006 15:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story! and ryou romance! is ther anything better? :) is ichigo still gonner be the leder or will it be THE SIXTH MEW (please let it be)
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Title: Neat.
Reviewed By: xAyameKaiousx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um it was a great chapter but I'm going to critize alittle...why did you make Sakura's transformation the same as Ichigo's with the whole scenery and the rat? I think you could of been more creative with that.The fox very creative but could you explain why she isn't some type of cat? I mean well...after all its called Tokyo MEW MEW I hope I don't come off to critical and too mean I'm sure you have a reason for it but update soon because in general and truthfulness I liked it alot and would like to see the next chapter! Thanks.Kelli. Author name:XAyameKaiousX you can come critize my story if you want but great job.^-^
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