| "Where I Belong" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: hello
Reviewed By: nicholas thompson On: August 04, 2007 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me agian. I may have gotten mad that you have given up but if really want ideas to finish the story I will help. I will give you a small continue to the story. But first I need Ideas myself. I enjoyed the story witch is why I am helping you. I will review agian shortly.
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Title: please write
Reviewed By: nicholas thompson On: July 31, 2007 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!!? I admit Bliksem is right but that does not mean you need to stop. If he says to take some time of...DONT LISTEN TO HIM. IT is your desision to took some time off I mean if he said jumping of a bridge would make your story better. WOULD YOU DO IT!!!!!!!! Ill even give you an idea mabye alex and aiden(paul and pichu)Make fiends with somebody on the boat and he has a made up atifact like an ancint bird flute that supposily calls zapdos, articuno, and moltres.but its a good luckcharm to this guy(lets call him red for now)and aiden in his new body fells a disturbing ora around the flute EVEN in the pokeball.And the S.S.ANNE gets anbushed by butch and caseddy and other team rocket grunts to get the flute. Is that okay? Please use my idea and don't get the idea your stoy isn,t good. Remember Quiting dosn't help and work on grammer. please don't stop.
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Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 19:44 CST
Comment/Review:
an interesting story indeed... i would like to see you continue this story, especially after your writing skills improved. i'm aware that you wrote this story a while ago, but have you heard of Pokemon Red Rescue Team and Blue Rescue Team for the GBA and DS (respectively)? this story kinda of reminds me of it. anyway, i really think you should cont this story.
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Title: Best Story I`ve ever read!!!
Reviewed By: Cool_Girl41 On: December 21, 2006 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is the best story I``ve ever read.Please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Title: Please update soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nessa Lynn On: December 21, 2006 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cool!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: Bliksem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
When I read the summary, I have to say that I was very interested. This story has the potential to be very, very good; however, I don't think that now's the time to be writing it. I'd suggest setting it aside for now and letting your skills improve; that way, it can become one of your masterpieces. The point of view changes after the first chapter, and I have to say that it is a no-no to do that. Either write in third person or first person, and keep it like that. For this type of story, I'd recommend first person. Keep up the good work, and don't give up. I can't wait to see what becomes of this story once you get really good.
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