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 Title: o_o
Reviewed By: wildbobcat [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2009 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love hina started being a nice and innocent story for "young adults" with Mr Ken Akamatsu. It was such a pleasent universe,I remember, full of colours, full of beauty ..just as our childhood. Unfortunatly life goes on and we've grown up, some of our dreams got broken, we've lost people we loved and we've realized life wasn't that simple, it wasn't that beautiful. In your story, love hina belongs now to real life..you've made the characters mortals.They're still full of love..They're touching. When I was reading your work I was very moved,I felt lost..how could this be ? how could all this wonderful story finish like that..it has no sense man, no meaning, this is so absurd,so fucking hard to admit and there's nothing to do about it , there's nothing to do about time,about death .. I stoped the lecture for a minute..i had to take a deep breath Actually i don't really know what to say..exept that I found that story sad and beautiful..just as real life.... sorry for my english, Tank you for writting that Take care and enjoy your life, from france.
 Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 31, 2006 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is the most beautifully written, saddest, most wonderful Love Hina story I have ever read. I was quite literally moved to tears, especially when Naru died. It reminded me all to well of when my own mother passed of cancer. As I read, I kept thinking "Oh no, not Naru. Not this way, any way but this." I laughed at the Naru-Punches, I cried at the death scenes, and I felt a pain wrench my heart every time your vivid words made it clear that both Naru's and Keitaro's own bodies were betraying them. I'm finding it progressively more difficult to continue this review, so I'll end it here.
 Reviewed By: Jc982  On: July 04, 2006 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I feel like out of all of the Love Hina Fanfictions I have read, this has to be the most touching. Keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: MitoFreak  On: December 11, 2005 18:55 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great Story. I think you captured the feelings of the original characters very well, and told a very interesting story of how their son views his parents in their later years.
 Title: Wow
Reviewed By: thoughts  On: December 06, 2005 12:26 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Really impressed. Very sad. Lovely touching moments through out. I loved the son's perspective on things. I loved that you kept the obsession with the photo booths. I found Shinobu's devotion touching and a bit sad but that is the same feeling that I had from the series. I really enjoyed the story and the glimpses you provided into the lives.

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