Reviewed By: Umi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved everything about Chapter 1! It had to be one of the most enjoyable reads I've come across in the MM Original section (and believe me...I've read almost all of them).
The only thing I thought was a little...weird was the dragon's name. I just thought it was weird...all in italics and lower case and such.
Oh and the formatting was a little off, which I'm sure isn't your fault. I know the webmaster fixed a bug with .doc files...but I'm not sure if that applies to you.
I loved this fic and I can't wait to read more! |
