| "You Can Never Go Home Again" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: B On: May 31, 2006 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a really good story please write some more also I really like the way you made it
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Reviewed By: Dragongame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. Please continue it soon.
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Reviewed By: Waruiko On: February 27, 2006 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMG / Ranma1/2 / Sailor Moon fics have been done in the past, though this one does have a bit of potential to be something grand and fresh, as it stands it is mearly uncommen. I truly think that I would enjoy reading more of this fiction should it be continued, and while I prefer a more naritive oriented writing style, the style used DOES complament the flow of the story as it stands, and there weren't any glaring holes or weakneses in the format. To be honest I just think that maybe it's just a fealing that there is a lack of experence. Heck you could go back over a fic like this after it is compleated and re-write it to kill any plot hole bunnies while 'touching up the paint' on the older work at the same time. Though I could be wrong and it's just me that thinks there is just the slightest bit off for the style and flow.
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Reviewed By: master-inu23 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is GREAT!! PLZ continue.
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Reviewed By: Gundraw [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 03:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Could be interesting, but as a previous reviewer said too much power is never very much fun. Of course this is the end of his journey, but that doesn't really change the fact that an unbeatable character isn't an interesting character. Several cliches had been reproduced here, some of which were fan created I'm sure. I'd like to see this continued however, more out of curiousity than anything
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Reviewed By: taxzombie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting start. I haven't seen that many where the writer starts at the end and then tells the tale of how they arrived there. I like the start. I hope to see more.
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Title: My review
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Genma is the brother of Gendo Ikari then... Now please update fast that promising fic. I want to know how Ranma became a god and what trouble he had to get there and if he got some rivals/enemies out of it. Besides if he got to know is conter-demon of the doublet system. Like Mara is the one from Belldandy . . . . BTW could you honor me with your rating on my homepage that you can find in my profile site? There under the 'contact me' section???
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Reviewed By: migele [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 03:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice idea, don't make Ranma another overkill god and so on. a perfect Ranma isn't much of a Ranma after all.
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Reviewed By: migele [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 03:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice idea, don't make Ranma another overkill god and so on. a perfect Ranma isn't much of a Ranma after all.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. I look forward to seeing where you take this story.
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Title: not bac fic
Reviewed By: Light02 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 00:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool fic, you had to make Genma related to Gendo Ikari on guy I'd shoot on site.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gendo Ikari IMHO MUST be related to Genma The Stupid. As for the premise, Good and with the Sailor Sensei and the Tenchi Contingent it should be interesting. BTW I'm a Ryoko/Tenchi/Ayeka fan so I'm interested if Ranma bagged Ryoko OR fell for Tenchi and is hooked up that way as Ranma-Chan. Great start! dennisud
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