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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I'm glad Sesshomaru put the bastard in that place! Now Inu and Kags can be together in peace. Well hope you update soon and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 23:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I would like to start by saying I'm sorry it took me so long to read your story. It is amazing. I found it by chances a while back and I thought I saved the link to look at it later but a fate would have it I didn't and it became lost in the world of spam fics. But I have found it again and I loved every chapter. You really made the characters your own while having them still remain slightly true to there orginial personalities. Oddly I feel slightly sorry for Koga. Not that he didn't deserve is ass kicking but it is sad that his demon nature caused him to loose his "true love". I was a bit mad at Inuyasha for putting unessary distance between him and Kagome. But once again you brilliantly explain why he is doing this thus making it okay. I also wondered how long it was going to take Kagome to figure out why Kikyo called her a replacement. Does it still bother her in the back of her mind or is she truely over it? And poor Yash. I felt so sorry for him when Sango mad the rest of the girls torture him. *laughs* " Kagome had told someone about their kiss. Someone... evil. Someone that was probably parading around backstage in her red fishnets, cackling merrily at his misfortune." A lot of funny things happened in this story (to the point where I had to cover my face and read, laugh, read, chuckle hard, calm down, and read again!) but I got a good cackle out of this one! *laughs again* "Someone... evil"! Usually I would consider Sango a bit too forward but you make it work in your story so don't change a thing. I do wonder what there is left to write about in this story. Koga and Kikyo have been dealt with but you are the author. Don't listen to me and stop. Do what you have planned. I also like the background music you give at the beginings. The whole band thing in fan fics is usually an early sign of a plotless story but I admire the way you have weaved it into your story. Not the main focus but definitly an important part. Well I could continue gushing but I have an update to write myself since my sprained thumb is now back in action. Well...right after I add this to my favorites...
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 18:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I absolutely ADORE this story. I am so freaking attached to the characters already. Everything about it is fantastic. The character development and back stories are excellent, the dialogue is great (of which I am usually picky and I'm loving this), the plot development is also perfect. Yes, the torture of them getting together was exquisite, BUT after so many chapters of anticipation that first lime was pretty damn worth the wait. Besides, I think the plot calls for time. You have a great story line and there's no need to rush it and make it cheap and you've done a perfect job so far. The friendships are sweet and you've captured everyone so well. Now I just get to freak out about what hellacious situation is going to occur when Kikyo finally decides to get her ass back in everyone's life. Turmoil is what I suspect, lol. Ok, now I'm rambling, but like I said, I adore this story and you've had me hooked from the first chapter and it has only grown more intriguing. Thanks so much for your time spent on this and I greedily await your next update!!
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 15:30 EDT
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Updates! I am simply in love with this story at the moment. Three cheers fo "Savvy" and it's wonderful plot, great characters, and hot ass limes that (I hope) will turn into lemons. Anyways, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
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Title: chap.26
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! You updated! I thought I'm gna die... tsk tsk. Anyways, me like this chap! Laughs... really really really REALLY AWESOMEEEEE ... n sweet.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me (not logged in, sorry) On: August 09, 2006 16:21 EDT
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OMG!....Can you imagine my mouth droping open? Cause it is! Even my tounge is rolled out!!! LoL! Maybe a little drool too. Ruins the keyboard however. heheh. That shower was STEEEAAMMMY! Whew. I had to take one just to cool down. At first I thought that you would do the smut action right in the shower, which puzzled me. Since you say Kagome is a virgin Im sure Yash would make it special. Getting your fuck on in the shower is for after the first time. (::smirk::) Another shocked-out-of-my-pants was that Kagome was calm to get in her birthday suit Inu, with no explanation and jump into it. They zipped off the clothes and got commando, so very casual that I didn't expect such forwardness. I think it was because I got the impression that the characters were caring and in love but shy at doing something bold. But its better this way. Its a good sign that they are getting more comfortable and open. I say it was the best thing to do!!!! To have that shower scene that showed love, emmotion and devotion between the two without the sex made it awe inspiring. They just held eachother close and told their love. You really dug into it and Im SO SO happy for you! Know now that you got one HUGE HENTAI uber pleased!!!! I officially can't hardly wait for the real sex-bouncing chapter to be up! For me, if you could add a tinge of Yasha-tounge-ring in it, I would be extatic!!!! And hey, Koga's getting his ass flown to Antartica. Brrrr. Keep your legs warm Koga, can't wear the wolf skin skirt anymore. Now if only you had sailed kikyou there too. She wouldn't be able to get drugs and that would be a benifit.......well one of the benifits on my mind. Lol! Shess and Rin are doing dandy too! Hope they arn't planning to bang and break anything. Geez its Kag's place afterall. I'm sure she wouldn't be thrilled. BUT who is she to know. She herself is butt-naked with THE 'InuYasha'!!!!! I would be numd from my head to the place between my legs, lol! It was preety cute that Rin was scrared too but believed in what Shess had said. Awww! Post again when you can! Love the song 'Broken', its a fav of mine! Ohhh, and I haven't forgotten about the secret surprise Yasha has in store! What the hell is it???? On the edge of my love seat here! Take care bitterness! Chat later? ^_^ Cioa bella.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 03:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EWWWW! There gonna do it in Kagomes apartment?!? LOL. Anyway good luck to Kouga, NOT!
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Reviewed By: InusBasket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 22:39 EDT
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Awesome keep up the gppd work!!
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Title: Ch 1 - 26
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 08, 2006 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This is actually my 3rd review (and it is much shorter.) The first two would not go through. The story is great. I noticed there was no Shippo (understandable since most of the story takes place around or in a strip bar.) I do not remember the Shikon jewel appearing as of yet (though I have not really missed it.) Just curious, how many chapters are you shooting for? Again, I am really enjoying the story. Cynbad146
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this chapter. You crack me up by having Sesshoumaru send Kouga to Antarctica that was just too funny. Maybe Sesshoumaru could send Kikyou there too (LOL) Anyways keep up the great work. can't want till the next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 26
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 17:23 EDT
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I know you said you weren't happy with this chapter but I thought it was a nice way to wrap up Kouga's incessant interference. Sesshoumaru was funny, sending Kouga to Antarctica in secret, lol. The shower scene was a nice tough and I liked the KagsxInu interaction. ^^ I could just picture Inu and Sess staking out Kouga on that rooftop and you kept them in character so well. The fighting scene was good between Inu and Kouga seeing as how Inu was doing hsi best to go easy on him for Kag's sake. I look forward to the next chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: Photographing Poetry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 05:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm guilty to say I read all of this in one day! I could barely tear myself away to take a shower! Great job on the personality of the characters. Hmm, Inuyasha with a tongue piercing? Would he do something like that? Maybe... . At least he doesn't smoke- it'd kill his senses. Haha. Uhm, the whole Kagome-the-virgin thing put me off, however, because it's done in every story... but it can't be helped, I suppose. I'll be looking forward to your next update- something tells me Kouga's getting his ass whooped.
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Title: Absolutely wonderful
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 04:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! For your first Inuyasha AU fanfic I am very impressed. ^^ You did a great job creating the modern setting and world they all live in while still keeping the magic from the feudal era. I love how, using characterization so well, you have managed to make all of the characters so deep and with such interestings pasts. It's refreshing to read an Inuyasha fanfic that has the youkai world completely concealed making it liek a secret organization. I can only wonder what would happen to Kikyou if she started telling people. That's another thign that interested me about the you kai world, we learn it as Kagome does. It's a very nice touch and keeps the intrigue of your readers. Not to mention the excellent way you write the personalities of Inuyasha and Kagome. I have to say, it was truly a pleasure watching them struggle with their issues to the point where they are now just starting out a new relationship. Now that the focus is more on Kags I wonder what Inu has in store for Kouga in the near future, lol. On a slightly more perverted note, I hope Kags gives Inu oral someday simply b/c it seems from your story that it'd be a pretty deep gesture to Inuyasha. At least before they have actual intercourse. JUst my opinion, although I'd LOVE to see how the Inuyasha in your story reacts to it! ;) Your story is very creative and original and I found it refreshing again when you talked about youkai mating and how it was different for each sub-species of youkai when concerning their ritual. You do an excellent job with the lemons by the way! :) I only hope that you write many more before the story is over! hehe As you can tell I enjoyed being immersed in your story very much and I do hope you continue writing it and continue to be inspired to keep writing. Hmmm, as for suggestions to improve your story, there were only minor grammatical errors I could find. Other than that I felt it flowed very well. I suggest trying to not skip too much time in the story in between chapters. It leaves us wondering what happened in that time since the last chapter. Other than that I can't think of anything which just goes to show how good your story is. Your chapter length is perfect and all I could ask for would be longer chapters. ;) Keep up the excellent work and I hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: Saori Kasamatsu On: August 02, 2006 03:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...god!! This is the BEST fanfic I've ever read! I just started reading it today and couldn't stop! Your an amazing writer, I LOVE YOU! ^.^ Thanks sooo much for this amazingly awesome story, pleaseeeeee update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Krystine On: August 01, 2006 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I am always left impressed by your marvelous writing abilities! I have to say that their little rump was very interesting...I hope to see many more! *chuckles* I have read sooo many fanfics and I've never been hooked on them till I read yours...and that's the truth. Finally!!! Inuyasha has shown the courage to be with Kagome! Koga is such a fag, though hot, but still a fag...ugh. I liked this chapter...a million Kudos for you!!! ^_^ Hmmm...I have a very big idea for a chapter if you'd like to hear it. Email me at kryshana@verizon.net if you'd like. It involves the strip joint and valentines day together...I'm sure you'll find it fascinating. Hehe. Let me know.... Keep up the great work!
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