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Title: SAVVY
Reviewed By: hellsangel5891 On: July 26, 2006 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that chapter was great , man i hope inuyasha kicks kogas ass soon, this chapter was really hot i mean really hott!!!
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Title: yum!
Reviewed By: Laurell-chan (nsi) On: July 26, 2006 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another delightful chapter as always! I liked the action mixed with the citrus at the end and especially love how you don't right 'typical' lemons. It's nice (and realistic) that you're waiting and building up to something, and your writing style is oh too sexy. Inu touching himself is a thought to get me through the work day hehe :p Anyways, ignore my Miroku moment. Loving this story more and more each update, great job!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: July 26, 2006 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this chapter. Glad to see an update from you. I like how your not rushing them into 'that' just yet. He's taking his time (as much as I know its killing him), but it seems like something Inu would really do. Though I wish you would have had more tongue ring action goin on there. *I know...I'm bad :)* But when they finally do get together I know it will be well worth the wait. I really like your style of writing, it's very tasteful, but still doesn't loose the lemony tartness that we all crave. Can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 10:01 EDT
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Very good! Darn that Kouga! Why don't he get it through his thick skull that Kagome doesn't want to be with him! Oi! please update soon.
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Title: Chapter 25
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 04:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, that was fucking hot!!! I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: EarthToMe001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it! I've only read about the first half so far, but let me tell you, I'm hooked. I noticed the title a few times before but was always a little iffy about it (not a huge fan of the we-find-each-other-attractive-so-sex-me-up-now stories and the strip club theme made me hesitate) BUT! I finally decided to give you a chance and I love it! Keep up the good work and I'll probably be up several more hours finishing what you already have written. ^_^
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Reviewed By: rinlover(offline) On: July 26, 2006 02:21 EDT
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-_-....I love it...you need to update soon. I want to see our newly found couple go FARTHER...I wanna see Kouga...nearly dead...and I would LOVE to see more fluffy action between rin and sess. I know, its very selfish of me to tell you my wants...but...you're too good for your own good. It's painful. I love it.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 02:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few words about this chapter.AWESOME, GREAT, PERFECT, BEAUTIFUL. I could use more words but you get the picture. Just update as soon as you can.
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Title: chap.25
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS......... AWESOME!!! GOD, WAS THAT GOOD! LAUGHS... HOTT.. >
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Title: w00t! w00t! w00t!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe-fucking-magnificent....you're kicking some awe-inspiring-mighty-major-ass here J-grrl ya know that? Very excellent chappie I must say. Just loved the beginning there too with that Kiss Me there from Inu. And Koga, being the dense-ass he is, was bound to show up sooner or later, hehe, but didnt he get a big-ass furry surprise, lol... Loved it! You really know how to tell a story....And I love the fact that you haven't put a full blown lemon in yet...what ya had him doin there towards the end there was too sexxay for words, but enough for me to go for a cold shower and the mighty bowl of M&Ms, lmao....keep it up J-grrl, this is great. :D
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life AKA Christina from the forum On: July 25, 2006 23:56 EDT
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That was sooo good. I KNEW that Koga was going to show up, from the second that Inu and Kag parted. Koga is such a bastard in this fic. *Beats him unconscious* And don't even get me started on Johnathon *kicks him in the family jewels* Kilala is the best. *huggles her* And Inuyasha...*glomps him* "I think he knocked me silly" I know it's bad but I giggled at that part. I know, I'm terrible! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Title: -insert maniac laughter here-
Reviewed By: Mizuhashi(Not logged in) On: July 25, 2006 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mother of God...I need a cold shower. That ending was...hot. It literally got me shivering and usually only a few spectacular writers, like CiraArana, can do that to me. And now I sound like a horny teenager bragging about their first time. -.-" Anywho, I was anticipating that whole Kouga meets up with Kagome, Inuyasha kicks his ass thing. That and anticipating when the flippin chapter would come out! Heh heh...yeaaaaa. Also that beginning with Inuyasha demanding that she kiss him... I'm sure that had all the girls swooning. I, for one, was thinking, "I want that! Now!" And which apparently I don't have that, and now I'm rambling about my personal life to a stranger over the internet and hundreds of others who actually read the reviews. ...I need a drink.
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa (NLI) On: July 25, 2006 23:18 EDT
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holy crap *blinks*wow you have a gift my friend, keep the fluffy stuff comeing!!!
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Reviewed By: keiko.chan On: July 25, 2006 23:01 EDT
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yup. ran here as fast as I could when I saw that post. lol WOW. lol. InuYasha toucing himself is SUCH a turn on. wikid-ness. wait. that's what you were waiting a year for??? *confused look* which part dangit??!! anywho. Keep on rawkin'
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Reviewed By: alakab4m On: July 25, 2006 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so good and i can't wait for you to update it. i love how you made it so dramatic and yet so sweet at the same time. keep up the good work! i can't wait to find out how it ends. write some more after you finish this story. (:
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