| "The Nature of Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: heartbreaking
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 14:54 CST
Comment/Review:
A good Sesshomaru portayal with a magnificent resolution, you are a talented writer. And as you explain at the end pregnancy does not take place until almot 7 days after when the egg implants so he had no way of knowing the morning after, despite what most may claim. However he might have notice she was in heat and toss the thought aside.
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Reviewed By: inuyashagurl1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 20:53 CST
Comment/Review:
wow its really good. pleez write more *puppy dog eyes*
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Title: Welcome back
Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm all for a happy ending. But I can't critisize you for never giving your fans that. You write so beautifully I can always forget the tragedy that you portray. This is probably your BEST story. Like always I look forward to your work even though I never comment on it. Techniqually this is a happy ending for inu/kag. Will you ever try to write a happy ending with sess/rin only time will tell. But if you never do I still love your work. :)
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