| "Insert you with Tala" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Hey!!
Reviewed By: Mokona1210 On: May 27, 2007 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here is an idea for your story. You could get them to Russai and all. Only to have the Demolition Boys and Boris recognize her. The a seen with all the alies of the Bladebreakers defend her.
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Title: i'm even posting a comment!!
Reviewed By: kasumi fan911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 06:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey ppl.... glad u all like my story especially those of u have reviewed and told me 2 keep writing... soz i haven't got chapter 10 up yet but i'm working on it.. and i'm slowly running out of ideas... if u want anything added in to this story as u are the main character... just leave it on a comment and i'll see what i can do.. i'll even mention ya when i do an a/n at the beginning :)
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Reviewed By: Maiya On: March 11, 2007 22:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOH! this is so good!! Me can't wait for ch. 10!! Go U!
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Title: kwl
Reviewed By: mokona1210 On: January 07, 2007 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so awesome. It makes me want to know wht will happen nxt. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. I'm dying to knw wht will happen.
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Title: *GASP*
Reviewed By: Isabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 15:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm now going to be thinking about what is going to happen next. That doesn't happen very often.
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 21:49 CST
Comment/Review:
that was awesome! you must continue!!! is she gonna be paired with tala?
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: TwisterGirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Update sooon!! I want to know what happens, so bad!! I'm begging you, Please Write more!!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Flamegirl_009 On: April 25, 2006 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so cool to actually be able to have a point of view during the story. Especially to be around tala. I'm so dieing to know what happens next. Please please PLEASE update more chaps.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Dark_Jedi On: April 14, 2006 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo this is a great story, u must update it ASAP i'm dieing to know what happens next. OH yer HAPPY EASTER. Bye
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Title: Please!!!
Reviewed By: Aerokitsune On: December 30, 2005 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Please please please update this again really really soon. I want to find out whats next.
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Title: cooolll
Reviewed By: x_velirea_X On: December 13, 2005 13:26 CST
Comment/Review:
this is soooooo cool, this is some good stuff i like the way u make i as if the reader is actualy one of the character's u should realy keep wrighting it, its soooooooooo coooool ;p
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Title: Yay!!!!
Reviewed By: Aerokitsune On: December 10, 2005 10:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Please Please please update soon. I want to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: _Dream_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 17:51 CST
Comment/Review:
write more
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