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Reviewed By: koniko chan On: February 18, 2006 12:53 CST
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^^ That was very well done! I feel for Inuyasha to an extent I know he totally deserves that sometimes but still the Inuyasha/Kagome part of me feels for him. I think my favorite part was when he started compairing Kikyo to Kagome I was laughing so hard! that was just great. As far as more on this story.... you could and I'd love to read it but at the same time is there really anything much left to say? cuz as a reader I can imagine what will come next. So totally up to either way I wanted to tell you how much I enjoied this story. I couldn't go to sleep last night till I had read all the chapters avlible on aff.net so needless to say I was up till 5am reading this. Thank you for shairing. Koniko
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Title: More please
Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: February 17, 2006 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please write more.. Sequel and epiloge and lots more. :D I love this one. its so great that you kept him in charater so well. KUDOS. Best dipition of sesshy falling for Kagome and staying soo sesshyish I've ever read.
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Title: Hee!
Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Floozy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 01:50 CST
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'We should take off our shoes,' she says. Haha! Nice throw back to The Incredibles and President Clinton there. Hmm. I really don't see what you could do in a sequel. Don't get me wrong, I'd love to read it. I just think that you'd have to make up an entirely new villain (is there two Ls in villain?) and the only unresolved issues I see are what happens to Inuyasha, how many kids that perv Sesshomaru makes (you turned him into a nympho. me likes), what happened to Kikyo (maybe THAT'S your new villain. Vilain? No there's two Ls.), and how the well is returned to normal so that 500 years from now the only thing sealing it is a few sutras. Also the shrine being made and all that, but that will come with the explaination about the well. So, yeah. I think you should do one more (long) chapter explaining these things and then have a little epilogue type thing with them in the future living like they do then. Did that make sense to you, cause it didn't to me. I don't know what you want to happen later on so I can't say anything definate. If you have a sequel in mind, then f*cking go for it! I'd still read it,cuz you rock! I'm sure it would be good. Alls I'm sayin is I don't know where you could go from here. Surprise me. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: inu-kag15(nsi) On: February 06, 2006 17:06 CST
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I think you should write an epilogue and solve the unanswered questions in this story. It's up to you though. Great chapter by the way.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should post an epiloge and a sequal.I got to find out what happened.*sobs*I can't belive its comming to an end. Capes can kill you ,lol!Oh how much I know that.
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Title: Quadrangle
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: SoutasSister (not logged in) On: February 06, 2006 10:11 CST
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Well, I usually don't like Kag/Sess pairings but you pulled me in to this one. There was some Out of Characterness to some of it but you've made me not mind it in the least. Nice job. Now, you can't just leave poor, clueless Inuyasha hanging. Give us an epilogue, please, and don't leave his life so tragic. Thanks. :)
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: February 06, 2006 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I would most definently look forward to a sequal, but the decision ultimately lies with you. (plz forgive me if my spelling sucks at the moment, im not quiet awake yet lol) wonderful story! i'm sorry you haven't been feeling well, hope you feel better soon. :) tc
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Reviewed By: Cerdwyn3 On: February 06, 2006 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absotuley love this story! Its fantastic! Definitely write a sequal I want to know how the Western Lands deal with having a seemingly human mate. ^_^ you can write an epilouge and a sequal if you want but I would love a sequal. Especially good fics should have sequals ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inu-kag15 (not signed in) On: January 31, 2006 20:29 CST
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I love it. I'm not usually a Sess/Kag fan, but the way you've written it out, I've almost fell in love with Sesshoumaru. I'm still a huge Inuyasha/Kagome fan, and I do hope they can settle their differences and what not. But the way you've portayed Kagome's emotions and losses, I almost feel Inuyasha isn't going to end up with her; he kind of lost his chance, I feel. But I'm still rooting for him, if that makes sense. Great story so far, I can't wait until it's finished and we find out how Kagome lives happily ever after and with who.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love it!Its one of the best!I usally read it on FF.Net but I wanted to see the un edited virson!please update.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You continue to impress me with you story. It's so much fun to read. You're right, you deserve to be yelled at but I'll let someone else do it. I'll just wait patiently for updates since I haven't updated my own story in a few days. I wouldn't want to be a hypocrite. As always, great job and I look forward to more.
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Title: Inuyasha is an idiot!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very interesting story! Somehow you managed to keep all the characters in character by emphasizing their strengths and weaknesses. The body switch was original for sure. I have never read any other Inu fanfiction where Inu and Sess switched bodies before. Spelling and grammar could use some work but that's all I'll say about that. It seems that in your fic Inuyasha is particularly idiotic, like he doesn't think at all. Personally I've never believed Inuyasha to be less intelligent than any of the other members of the Inu-tachi but couldn't help but feel he was particularly dim-witted in your story. He had to know that even though Kags ignores his words that his actions matter the most. He had to know he had betrayed her in many ways. He obviously knew something cause he felt guilty. Now that she's with Sess it's like bells have just started going off. Honestly, I am not a fan of the SessXKag pairing, nor will I ever be, but you setup the moments quite well. I just hope Inuyasha and Kagome can resolve their differences. I have to admit though, after reading your story and seeing all the pain Kagome has suffered in this story, it did feel gratifying to know that near the end of this chapter he was finally sufferring over the way he treated Kagome.
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Reviewed By: fatalfeline 2 lazy 2 log her ass in On: January 24, 2006 14:04 CST
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that was wicked! i cant wait 2 c wat happens next!
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Title: Quadrangle
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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